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| Hello, dear mylotters, this is a composition written by me, could you help me to find out the faults in it, including those in grammer, or give me some advices. Thanks a lot! It is a weekend... | | | | Nowadays in my country some people are likely to live in the city, because life there is very convenience. People can get sorts of things they want directly. On the another people are preffer to lead... | | | | I think everyone want to travel to all the places that they want,but it is a contradiction that when people have enough time, they have little money;when one is rich enough,then he or she is occupied... | | | | people always say that money is not everything, but I found that it is difficult to live without money. All the things that are neccessary in my life, such as house, food, clothes, must be link to... | | | | The USA goverment withdrawed most of it's troop from Iraq,which seems to mean that the war in Iraq has been ended. As we know,this war lasted for 7 years lead to numerous death of America and Iraq... | | | | |
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