mylotrix reloaded!!!
By missak
@missak (3311)
Spain
May 14, 2007 10:14pm CST
Hi everyone, I have finally uploaded my second video for the mylot contest!! I had many problems with compression since I had to use a lot of letters to show more information than in the first one, as many mylotters reccomended me. I hope you can still read the letters: in the original uncompressed version they looked good but in youtube compressed version I am not very sure... I has a lot of work and I am very porud of it, I hope you like it and I hope it doen't have the problmes of the previous one.
Take a look: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fY8hHux3lps
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7 responses
@misheleen73 (6037)
• United States
15 May 07
I think you did a good job on this one too as with the first. I have to say your two are my favorites, I was just watching all of them and only one other even got my attention. Some of them are way too long. I would say you got all the info, maybe clearing up the words & slowing them down in the beginning and a few spelling errors. Other than that, it is really really good. The best out of the 21 that are currently there !!
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@misheleen73 (6037)
• United States
15 May 07
ok, here's a few tips, I really want your video to be number one !!
Beginning: it should read "The human brain has 1 trillion neurons" using the word the, makes it flow better
Day by day millions of intruders assault "those" neurons ( instead of that, that is singular where those is plural )
self "esteem" issues (not steem)
A world of "knowledge" (you used knowaledge)
Where you used "your doubts will get hurt" I think it would sound better "your doubts will be freed"
A legion of friends that really "care" for you. (again in English when you are using plural for friends you use singular "care" strange rules, but that's how they are :P )
come and sign "up" for free. (instead of sign in) you sign in if you are already a member, to become a member, you sign "up")
Not our friend?
"Then you are our enemies' friend" (using then you are makes if flow better and sounds better)
That's it, I hope it's not to hard to fix the errors. I only want to help your video be all that much better.
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@missak (3311)
• Spain
15 May 07
Many Many thanks!!! I am afraid it is a little bit dofficult to correct that now that my working computer is broken, but I'll do that and repost it corrected as soon as I can (in a few days)!! Very nice work you have done for me... I am proud of being you friend, althought I just can be an e-friend :)
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@jeweledbluerose (3061)
• United States
15 May 07
Great job with your second video. I like this one much better than your first. I'm a speed reader so could read everything just fine, but yeah the words did a little fast, but that's the only thing I see wrong with it. I give two thumbs up anyway.
Wish I could make videos and submit them, but alas my computer is still in the dark ages and not able to run any of those movie maker softwares that are out. :( Maybe someday I'll be able to. Unless someone knows of a program that Pentium 3 Windows 98SE users can use.
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@jeweledbluerose (3061)
• United States
15 May 07
Thanks for the tips and links. I will look into them as soon as I get done posting here on MyLot. Again great job with you video. Good luck with the contest.
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@lamiaa (581)
• Egypt
15 May 07
the idea is so great , i love it , the only thing that is the words in the start run so fast that i can't read it , but from your video i felt what is the words is , but it is so fast and some times lost in the colour of the background , that is only in the first but after the brain explosion it is all great .
@missak (3311)
• Spain
15 May 07
I know.... I was so sad when I saw myself the youtube version.... the colors are totally different! for the letters, you can read them much better with better resolution, but actually most of them are just here to make a sensation, you don't need to read them completely to understand the idea... I think I'll post somwhere the original version for you to compare...
@lamiaa (581)
• Egypt
15 May 07
nooo .don't be sad please , if you read my post again you will know that i felt what you want to say in the video , and some will feel the you meant this , to clear your point , maybe we can say you meant that if i didn't join mylot i will be distracted as this words but after i joined it every thing was clear , that is called art :)
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@ItTakesAllSorts (4096)
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29 May 07
I just watched it and it does send out a powerful message. I love the way the brain explodes.
Good luck!!
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@missak (3311)
• Spain
15 May 07
It is youtube compression... That made me very sad and angry, in my original video everything seemed ok... I am planning to post the original one somewhere to compare... And perhaps I'll try to make a version with less text, but then I'll come back to the lack of information of my first video :S I'm driving crazy with all that... :)
@JessyBlue (536)
• United States
29 May 07
WOW, Takes talent to put together a good creative video, and you've done just that. It was REALLY good!!
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