A poem that I wrote, What do you think?
June 7, 2007 10:09pm CST
Is this how it's supposed to be? To want to believe But nothing to believe in To want to be happy But to make you happy To smile But inside you know it's nothing more than a lie Is it wrong to want to die When no one notices your alive Crystal Rae Ramey
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8 Jun 07
I liked your poem here is one of mine!! The nights I sit and wonder To natures beauty I take a small walk Embracing myself in all the peace around As I look to the night oh how the lake glistens in the moonlight Natures third shift has now taken its course The owl on the tree looking for food The frogs hoping on the lilly pad Hearing the chirping sounds as such beauty surrounds me Peace and love as I see two horses playing in the night Night so peaceful as I finally found me a tree Falling asleep to the peace of nature in its comfort now I fully sleep!!