Writing,,,

@sreevasu (2717)
India
June 21, 2007 1:02pm CST
While taking bath the shower stopped all of a sudden The pipe with rust turned still with a whistle My body turned chilled as the drops flow down And a cool breeze through the window stretched its fingers For a moment I felt shivering just for a moment My cloth of wetness Flew away leaving me in nude Water drops now writes few lines in my body
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4 responses
• United States
22 Jun 07
You are very talented my friend. Have you published anything? I think you should consider it. Thanks for sharing.
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
22 Jun 07
Oh, sorry Margieanne, not for publishing. Thank you so much for the encouragement.
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• United States
22 Jun 07
We live only one life, so go for it sugar. Do it.
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
23 Jun 07
Nop dear, just some thoughts and loved to share it with all. Or say it is already published here before you ! :-)
@Phlamingho (7831)
• Denmark
21 Jun 07
Did you write that yourself? Nice :-)
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
21 Jun 07
Yes, Phlamingho. Thanks
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@mimpi1911 (25454)
• India
3 Jul 07
i know what what they wrote - its all about being you, yourself and your loved ones, your indispensable self and its story..
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
3 Jul 07
Hmmm....So you read all that!! I feel shy. I am in real :-) blush
@mimpi1911 (25454)
• India
3 Jul 07
yes i did. it doesn't require eyes , i could read through my mind and soul. you need not feel shy, sreevasu.
• United States
3 Jul 07
love the writing
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
3 Jul 07
Thank you for the appreciation, it would have been more if you could explain how or why you loved it, though.