to all poets out there...

@abi1005 (194)
Philippines
October 23, 2007 3:16am CST
to start..here's my piece...feel free to share yours.. :) you came.. ..i smile you smile.. ..i laugh you cry.. ..i mourn and then you left.. ..i die
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@kuirqs (512)
• Philippines
8 Nov 07
I agree with ArmyWifeJessica. It's very simple but has a lot of emotions. I am not as good in critiquing, and will still have to get the hang of it. However, if you want more people to critique your work (and not just poetry but other genre as well), I can PM you a site that's great for writers, where you can earn and join contests as well as get critiqued for your work. Do let me know if you're interested. Thanks.
@abi1005 (194)
• Philippines
15 Nov 07
hi there kuirqs..thanks for dropping by.. maybe someday i will try the site that you're talking about. but i guess, i still have to practice my writing skills since im not that really good. as of the moment, i am trying to write a song..maybe i'll let you read it after and let's decide if im good enough to visit the site for critiques to see. lol thanks again..see you around..
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@kuirqs (512)
• Philippines
15 Nov 07
Okay, I'll PM you the site in the case you feel like checking out the site one of these days. It'd be great to read more of your work (maybe even on the site too?). You can also submit your work under a "song writing" genre in the site I'm talking about. It doesn't hurt to have your woork critiqued since you'll also learn in the process. Don't worry coz it's all good over there. Hope to see you there soon!