Please comment on the Logo...

@Syam4u (307)
India
October 29, 2006 12:22am CST
We are three friends Loveson Anoop& Syam. We are doing some creative works, arts, computer& electronics. We formed a group called LAS. We designed a logo for it!!! Please comment on our LOGO...really we value it...
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22 responses
• United States
29 Oct 06
Lovenson, Anoop & Syam logo reworked by Lauri Jean - This image was saved from myLot website and reworked in Paint Shop Pro to illustrate a simple way to improve the logo in repsonse to a post to give feedback on a logo.
Here's a simple rework of your logo (myLot had not protected it in any way shape or form so it was easy to download). Hope you don't mind but thought it might illustrate what I was talking about. Using a divider line and your names at least makes the logo have some relevance.
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@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
we infront of our college
thanks for ur comment... have alook at us... left one is Anoop mid one Loveson and the right most one is me itself..
@tarachand (3895)
• India
29 Oct 06
Generally logos are longer rather than broader. A log has to mean something. What does you logo mean? It really does not show LAS directly. And I think that you must make the parts thicker, from far it looks like a drooped male organ that is going erect. No offense intended, you wanted my opinion. All the best for your new venture.
@tarachand (3895)
• India
29 Oct 06
Lmao! Thanks for the response.
@Sunset50 (1397)
• United States
29 Oct 06
I think it's really neat. You guys did an excellent job. Good luck with your business adventure.
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@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
Thank you for ur appreciation. anyway our's is not a business effort..we r doing our final year graduation in Electronics... Our works are just for some xtra earnings...n its our hobby..
@balasri (26553)
• India
29 Oct 06
It is nice.The positioning and size will improve it a lot I think.All the best
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@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
Thank you for ur appreciation.
@Faye88 (1009)
• Singapore
29 Oct 06
Sorry to say I do not like that design.As the Word "LAS" is not clear (you cannot really link to it as LAS).Secondly the colour it does not attract people or should I say catch peoples eye at first sight.At least make the word stand out.Imagine you put hundreds or thousand of logo togather with all the brand name and yours logo is in it.Will you be looking at it and will it stand out from the rest---meaning will it be attracting most people to look at first sight?Will you be able to see it from afar?
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@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
Thank you for your valuble comment... Tell me how can we improve our work...
@stezieb (2185)
• United States
29 Oct 06
Your logo is really nothing special. What exactly is it a logo for? Are you and your friends starting a business? If so, take note that this doesn't look very professional.
@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
Howz the painting...??
We r just students, doing our final year engineering in Electronics. All r placed in various MNC... So its nothing related to business or profession.... We r doing so many works...like web site designing, Electronic projects, Photoshop designings, Software projects too...as a part of xtra earnin.. so we thought of a logo...
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@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
check this work... http://www.raywilliam.com/ y u comment that the logo is not good....
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@stezieb (2185)
• United States
29 Oct 06
You are designing websites/software for money, you are doing this logo for a business. This is my first logo that I have made, it was my very first attempt made when I was only 13 year old.
@birthlady (5613)
• United States
29 Oct 06
Your logo is eye-catching, and has a good flow. The eye follows the line, and it is an interesting design. I can recognize "L" and "S" but not "A". Have fun with it! My logo is my avatar. My logo is for my website, Auntie Natal 911.
• India
29 Oct 06
Actually the letters 'A' and 'S' share the same part
@loveson (11)
• India
29 Oct 06
What abt we designing a T-Shirt with this logo on it? Guys any suggestions??
• United States
29 Oct 06
Cafe Press offers free stores to people who wish to sell their designs on products. You might consider them. You can do t-shirts, cups, mouse pads, thongs and more. I think even a clock last I looked. Anyhow, might be a no cost way for you to see if there is a market for logo items.
• United States
29 Oct 06
The letters LAS are not instandly viewiable, it is a bit too anbstract and has an arabian look to it. Did you want that? If you are hung up on this image and want to keep it, what about placing basic english text in a small but readable font such as Arial underneal with Lovenson, Anoop & Syam. You could seperate the two by a solid line in a different color or something like that. Right now, the logo says nothing to me except I start thinking about heiroglyphs and acient languages.
@4109293 (592)
• India
29 Oct 06
Hey guys.. Why don you post some thing on the folowing topics.... What do you think of this pic-1 What time is it there.. The most beautifull lady on earth Name a baby... Telugu samethalu Born in January Born in February Born in March Born in April---till Born in December.. What is your wish of the day... Reusing oneside paper
@4109293 (592)
• India
29 Oct 06
Are you starting another company as TVS. Then this logo suits good for that...
• India
29 Oct 06
Nice suggestion buddy..Haha
@univermal (104)
• United States
29 Oct 06
it has a cool type look...
@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
Thanks...
@aimania (30)
• India
29 Oct 06
It looks like an evil symbol
@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
;-) But we r not evils... any way thanks for ur response...
@sambosch (845)
• India
29 Oct 06
Good logo but add some background to it.
@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
thanks da...
@istanto (8571)
• Indonesia
29 Oct 06
I think you have to play with the color and layer.
@Syam4u (307)
• India
29 Oct 06
Thank you for ur valuble responce... any suggestions...
@Flaine (404)
• France
1 Nov 06
claas - claas mb
It is beautiful, but red is quite "agressive"
@PATTU4U (42)
• India
1 Nov 06
that soperb
@varuntr (644)
• India
29 Oct 06
i didn't like it....
@BigMouth (335)
• India
29 Oct 06
that is cooool !
• Philippines
29 Oct 06
classic, bold, forward, fierce, artistic, sense of "Magnus Opus", simply complicated. hmmm may not fit for your company, personally i think its better off as a movie logo or something, probably because of the color? : ) make it more techie, and fun??
• India
29 Oct 06
The logo is looking like VS rather than LAS,Also its looking like some Mythological design(especially Hindu).As you said you are doing some creative work in the field of arts,computer&electronics th logo must define all of the three but it defines only art and consider your company puts a new TV in market,just imagine how it will look on it!!!make a logo with red,blue and silver color on it and keep not many curves rather keep more definite lines.