my first poem ever made..
10 Nov 06
here is one of my poems...hope you like it.. Afraid I’m afraid of getting lost in the night For the night makes me feel forgotten By someone whom I treasured the most Precious moments that we shared Holding hands you and I Sharing a love that was divine I should’ve taken my time Cause sometimes a moment in this life Is all we have a slice of heaven A dot of pleasure It makes me sad that knowing Ill wake up Tomorrow knowing Ill be still here But knowing that my dreams With you may not Hurts me the most Waking up alone in this quiet dark night As the leaves fall from the trees Darkness is here but you’re not By my side holding each other so tight All alone know Ill never be alright In this life or the next I shall never forget The moments I shared with you.
3 Jan 07
Once an incident forced me to write something,and i found a short of writing,surprised to know you,that's the first poem of mine.At the age of 20 where the teenage is overed. i would like to post that here,but that's in my mother tongue "oriya",of titled "Paribartana".
18 Dec 06
my first poem was on my dad.i saw him figitin with somethin and it made me laugh so i thought y dont i write a poem on him so here it is .. MY DAD -----is my dads name, who always wants money and fame. He is dark and strong and according to him he never goes wrong. on every step he has to give an advice, which may or may not be wise. he is suffering frm a disease called diabetes,whihc has no cure and cannot be treated by any surgeries. he is alwasy ready to help others, even if the other person does or does not bother, he works day and night, and helps others wid all his might. my mom always scold at my dad and then he turns out to be evry sad. nevertheless,he is sweet and nice, and is also very wise.
• Janesville, Wisconsin
15 Nov 06
My first poem was written in song form... I did not write it down until a few years ago.. I was 6 when I made up this little song though.. So when I wrote it was scribbles... :D . I Like Trains. I like Trains, I like the sound of the train. I like Trains, I like the sight of the train. I like Train, I like everything about a train. I not can't understand why everyone ain't not love trains. (This last line changed in different variations.) I don't know why one can't like trains. I not know why no one all like trains etc. :). :) - DNatureofDTrain.