my first poem ever made..

@belenR (256)
Philippines
October 29, 2006 9:32pm CST
hi guys! who among u have made his/her first poem? at what age? and what is the title of the poem?
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15 responses
@wathanjim (2215)
• United States
9 Nov 06
I would like to read Your poem.
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@belenR (256)
• Philippines
10 Nov 06
ill post my poem whenever i got some free time..tnx for the reply
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@belenR (256)
• Philippines
10 Nov 06
here is one of my poems...hope you like it.. Afraid I’m afraid of getting lost in the night For the night makes me feel forgotten By someone whom I treasured the most Precious moments that we shared Holding hands you and I Sharing a love that was divine I should’ve taken my time Cause sometimes a moment in this life Is all we have a slice of heaven A dot of pleasure It makes me sad that knowing Ill wake up Tomorrow knowing Ill be still here But knowing that my dreams With you may not Hurts me the most Waking up alone in this quiet dark night As the leaves fall from the trees Darkness is here but you’re not By my side holding each other so tight All alone know Ill never be alright In this life or the next I shall never forget The moments I shared with you.
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@achilles7 (1277)
• India
10 Nov 06
The first poem that i made was published in the college magazine.It is about wasting of time and then rushing to finish the job at hand
@belenR (256)
• Philippines
13 Nov 06
tnx for the reply
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@donglory (677)
• Ghana
10 Nov 06
r u a female
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@belenR (256)
• Philippines
13 Nov 06
yes..
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@ishqvishq (1023)
• India
10 Nov 06
AISH - YES
I HAD NEVER MAKE ANY POEM BUT I CAN MAKE FOR U I may not be a clock that may text you 24hrs a day but my heart will be like a clock that will not stop caring & saying u r always remembered.
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@belenR (256)
• Philippines
10 Nov 06
tnx for that..ur the 2nd person who make a poem for me..
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@harish4u (1393)
• India
15 Nov 06
i havent written any
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@kaidei (696)
• Malaysia
10 Nov 06
yes..ihave..when im 10 years old..the title of the poem is.... I LOVE MY CAT.. hohohhohohohoho im not kiddin lor.. hohohoh
@olgiana (242)
• Mexico
25 Nov 10
I remember that we had to write poems in high school even if you felt that you have no talent or skill, you still and to do that. In my senior year i was in love and I wrote a poem from my heart, and the poem was about USA. I dont remember the title now.
@dss_raja (427)
• India
3 Jan 07
hindi. i wrote it at 15 yrs
• United States
3 Jan 07
i don't remember how old i was when i wrote my first poem...i don't even remember the title. however the first poem that i wrote and really liked was world of despair...although it's kind of a sad poem.
• India
3 Jan 07
Once an incident forced me to write something,and i found a short of writing,surprised to know you,that's the first poem of mine.At the age of 20 where the teenage is overed. i would like to post that here,but that's in my mother tongue "oriya",of titled "Paribartana".
@greengal (4288)
• United States
21 Dec 06
I wrote my first poem when I was 13. It was titled the "Land of Goodies" and it was for my school magazine. It was about a fnatasy land with lots or goodies, but in the end turns out a witch is wishing for this land. Lol..
@rmuxagirl (7568)
• United States
20 Dec 06
I wrote my first poem when I was 14. I wrote to express feelings, and the poem was called The Wolf. It was about a frightened wolf on the surface, but deeper it was about me.
• India
18 Dec 06
my first poem was on my dad.i saw him figitin with somethin and it made me laugh so i thought y dont i write a poem on him so here it is .. MY DAD -----is my dads name, who always wants money and fame. He is dark and strong and according to him he never goes wrong. on every step he has to give an advice, which may or may not be wise. he is suffering frm a disease called diabetes,whihc has no cure and cannot be treated by any surgeries. he is alwasy ready to help others, even if the other person does or does not bother, he works day and night, and helps others wid all his might. my mom always scold at my dad and then he turns out to be evry sad. nevertheless,he is sweet and nice, and is also very wise.
• India
2 Dec 06
i wrote in the age of 15.
• Janesville, Wisconsin
15 Nov 06
My first poem was written in song form... I did not write it down until a few years ago.. I was 6 when I made up this little song though.. So when I wrote it was scribbles... :D . I Like Trains. I like Trains, I like the sound of the train. I like Trains, I like the sight of the train. I like Train, I like everything about a train. I not can't understand why everyone ain't not love trains. (This last line changed in different variations.) I don't know why one can't like trains. I not know why no one all like trains etc. :). :) - DNatureofDTrain.