Early Script

I just read an early script of the Labyrinth (http://www.astrolog.com/labyrinth/script.txt) and I found it to be interesting. I was wondering if anyone else had read the script and what they thought of it. I enjoyed how it started out, but I'm glad that the ballroom scene and the fiery scene were changed. On the other hand, I wish that they would have kept the scene with the wiseman and Ludo as well as the scene where Hoggle is in a pool of water.