l o n e l y ...!!

India
April 21, 2008 12:03pm CST
There's an invisible wall in between... When i see from this side,everything is so colorful... But when i see from the other side, nothing is clear. Nothing is right. Nothing is what i wanted and expected. Nothing is bright and colorful. Its all foggy. Its all black and white. Its all dark. As if...there was a huge thunderstorm and it took away everything...and everyone. I feel a tightness in my throat and i could feel the sting in my eyes. I open my mouth and am trying to say something... But no one is hearing me. Everyone's busy. Everyone's on their own. Everyone's running here and there. But... I seem to be the only one,who is not moving...standing at one place. And then I realized... There's no time! There's no time for anything! No time for love! No time for breath! No time for a smile! No time for anyone! And now... I am left behind. I am alone!
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5 responses
FourCorners2008
@FourCorners2008 (28)
• Canada
27 Apr 08
Oh, I like that. I have felt it - you're not alone! This, ladies and gentlemen, is what writing what you feel is about. Nicely done.
TRUTHTRUST
@TRUTHTRUST (118)
• India
28 Apr 08
Thank u.:)
kity1986
@kity1986 (10)
• China
9 May 08
for me,I like to be alone,when i feel quite and happy,I can do everything I want and do not need to consider the feeling of others ,it is so good ,at this time ,you can do the work efficiently ,you are so free ,you can concentrate on something.
joimarquez
@joimarquez (1836)
• United States
1 May 08
wow thats a really piece.. i like it. very creative goog job.. when i feel lonely i usually drive and try to see new things. i do this to forget loneliness and refresh my mind. i dont think i will enjoy feeling lonely thats kind of weird dont you think?
sweety10
@sweety10 (188)
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29 Apr 08
nice poem...touch d heart...each n every word its so touchy,full of emotion...n its describe dat how much u alone....
deserteagle
@deserteagle (16)
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29 Apr 08
nicely placed words had caught up the tune of emotion in the reader.this had come from bottom of your heart.i hope you r not that lonely to feel.i am here for you.even though we don't know each other,you r not lonely.always remember SILENCE IS VIOLENCE.and loneliness leaves silence around us.so don't be lonely.