First post in Poetry...

United States
May 6, 2008 4:27pm CST
Although I am no where near new to poetry, I am new to this section. Just thought because writing is such a huge part of my life that I'd share some of what I have with others. I'm not the rhyming type although a good rhyme every an then isnt so bad. Hopefully you will be able to connect with me in some way and continue to come back to my posts. Not Quite Murder In a dimly lit alley, She sits alone. Her limp body shakes As if cleansing herself from his touch. Blood seeps from her ear, Down the curves of her breast,Turning her skin, From porcelain to wine. Feeling the tickle of wetness, She smudges it into her skin. ..She Smiles Wiping a tear from her face She whispers, "I love you"
2 responses
• Brazil
14 May 08
I will say just one thing to describe your poem: EMO! =P
@Sheribabe (445)
• United States
6 May 08
I'm getting a vampire vibe here.... I could be wrong...hmmm