First Line...

Philippines
May 14, 2008 11:20pm CST
I wrote this poem when I was in second year highschool. This was about my first crush back then and he doesn't know about it. Today that guy already have his own family, a lovely wife and daughter. Hope you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed those days back in highschool. First Line There's something inside me Of what my first line should be I was wondering and thinking Until one day you came to me. The first time I saw you A feeling has been built inside me Things started to change Whenever you're near I act strange. I look at you..looking at me My heart is in joy and want to break free You started caring for me And I appreciate it wholeheartedly For all of my life I never found a person Who will be at my side And never set me aside. Maybe its wrong to love you Because I'm afraid to tell My true feelings for you Which I might not fight for it well. Then I'm done with thinking And I decided to tell you But what will be my first move? If the first line never should.
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4 responses
@chirantani (1382)
• India
15 May 08
Hi!! Wow!! You write good poems, I like it a lot.Thanks for sharing it with us. I used to write poetry in my mother tongue once,but now I don't get any time for that.
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• Philippines
16 May 08
Hi there! thanks for the comment. Why don't you share your poems here even if its written in your native tounge. And maybe you could explain or translate it. What's your nationality anyway?
• India
16 May 08
I am Indian by birth and written those poems in Bengali.
@helsin (57)
• United States
16 May 08
Wow that is a really good poem i liked it alot you should keep writing them it's nice to have a lighter poem form time to time most of mine are really dark
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• Philippines
16 May 08
I also have dark poems. One day I'll try to post one, the one that's kind of dark but with so much feeelings in it. Thanks for your comment!
• Indonesia
15 May 08
that's nice and sweet poem! i wish i was the guy thx for sharing it here.
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• Philippines
16 May 08
wow thanks! Well that's way back high school days and its been like 12 years now
• United States
18 May 08
That's really good. And I know this feeling all too well. The lost moments in time that you wish you could take back. But, at the same time it would ruin the history that the other person has made. For example, the guy you liked is now married with a kid. It's hard to look back and think that maybe if you did something differently in the past you will still be with them. But, you would have to erase the life that they have already made for themselves. Thought provoking. Well done.