Looking for a Title can you help ... thanks
By lynn2457
@lynn2457 (500)
United States
June 13, 2008 8:43pm CST
Joys and Sadness, Peace of mind
Open doors to find you behind
Jumping ropes, playing jacks,
Yester years my dreams come back
People laughing, People crying,
Hopes of tomorrows are never dying
Children singing, children sharing
Growing up for thy are learning
Life is all we make of it,
Life is all we see
Life will keep you loving, playing
no matter how old you'll be
Hoping, Caring, Mercy, Grace
Only God can see your face
Thinking, praying, joys of sharing
Open doors without a trace
Growing old, keeping up those
yesterdays were not enough
People crying, People laughing,
Hopes and dreams are never dying
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3 responses
@greendragon_1974 (12)
• United States
16 Jul 08
Very beautiful poem. Is this something that you wrote that you're looking to title or something that was already written that you're looking for the title of?
@lynn2457 (500)
• United States
17 Jul 08
Hi greendragon,
Yes, I wrote it, I am playing around, I have a few things written, but, I cannot figure out a name for this. I have like 3 with no names. Thank you for telling me you like it, I always wonder if any is any good. Yet, I make them for me, I guess. Things that has happened in my life, things that come to my mine.
If you think of one let me know thank you again for responding.
@greendragon_1974 (12)
• United States
18 Jul 08
I read this to my dad. He suggested 'The Ways of Life'.
@angelia286 (2029)
• Singapore
1 Jan 09
Days of Yesterdays?
It's quite nice! Is it written by yourself??
