The break up poem...

@Zelmarq (11503)
Cebu City, Philippines
September 11, 2008 5:11pm CST
The poem I made 10 months ago....... I gave it all to You, though it was painful, I know You'd always be there by my side, Its different now, I didnt listened before, and now Your word is so strong, I cant help but obey. Maybe this is the ONE TRUE LOVE, YOU are my true love, You knocked in my heart many times, I didnt heard YOU, I was busy with my found earthy love, thought it made me complete, but never knew all along, that it was YOU, it was YOU all along. Eight years, I never thought I could make it through, with out the love the I have found, But, it was YOUR WORD that was worth it all, You gave it to me during the commitment conference, and You made it all easy for me, though there were tears, but YOU wiped it all for me, YOUR WORD comforting me, YOUR WORD healing me, YOUR WORD revealing to me, and YOUR WORD showing me the love beyond compare. THank you dear Lord, thank you for being so patient with me, I am going to wait on YOU, and YOUR will for my life. I Want to love YOU more.....
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@Lakota12 (42684)
• United States
12 Sep 08
A very inspiring poem
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@Zelmarq (11503)
• Cebu City, Philippines
12 Sep 08
Thank you very much for the compliment my friend. Have a nice day and take care!!!!!
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@Lakota12 (42684)
• United States
13 Sep 08
your very welcome!
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@flowerchilde (12520)
• United States
13 Sep 08
How nice!!! I'm kind of excited and on fire these days too.. the word just gets better and better and richer and richer.. alive in His Spirit.. the best way to start and end the days.. and He gets more and more wonderful as we go along..
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@Zelmarq (11503)
• Cebu City, Philippines
13 Sep 08
Yes thats very true my friend, a matter of making Him first in our lives. He comforted me through His words and I can feel it healing me giving me more hope for the future.
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• United States
13 Sep 08
Good for you! that's very good to hear!
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@Zelmarq (11503)
• Cebu City, Philippines
13 Sep 08
Thank you my friend.
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@williamjisir (22905)
• China
12 Sep 08
A good poem you have written! Thank you so much for sharing with us about your true feeling on love. Yeah, love is something that makes us happy and good, with which life is much more meaningful and wonderful. Good day, Zelmarq.
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@Zelmarq (11503)
• Cebu City, Philippines
12 Sep 08
Thank you for the compliment, this what happens when we are full of emotions, we cant help but express it.
@BriNbai (912)
• United States
11 Sep 08
This is nice good job.When I was In highschool I used to read these every day of the week..but I think I like your better than all lol..I hope your back togther with this person since there was true love? or maybe you moved along since it was 10 months ago.
@Zelmarq (11503)
• Cebu City, Philippines
11 Sep 08
Thank you very much my friend. I just wrote it here on the computer and immediately posted it to my blog. I have not edited it yet. Its just what my heart wanted to say, I expressed it all there. Happy mylotting....
@carmelanirel (20979)
• United States
11 Sep 08
Wow, I like this poem, thank you for sharing it..You have some real talent here..:)
@Zelmarq (11503)
• Cebu City, Philippines
11 Sep 08
Thank you very much my friend. Thank you for the compliment..