A poem: The second half of my soul

@mojcica (1511)
Slovenia
October 22, 2008 3:38pm CST
on every path I set my feet wherever I'm alone the emptiness which pleads to be fulfilled is more and more ingrown so I search for you for every beat my heart adore I know you could complete the void inside my broken core for the one thing I can't ignore you are the second half of my soul~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ by me...
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4 responses
glords
@glords (2614)
• United States
22 Oct 08
Very Romantic. Sounds like teenage romance is in the air. Aww the passion of youth. Congrats
mojcica
@mojcica (1511)
• Slovenia
22 Oct 08
it's not teenage, but it is a romance ;) Thank you!
glords
@glords (2614)
• United States
27 Oct 08
I'm sorry, I thought it must be young love because you sound so passionate... somehow that passion seems to get lost as we get older. I'm glad you've held on to that passion. Life is amazing when you are young at heart.
Welbert
@Welbert (1)
• Philippines
23 Oct 08
who wrote dis poem?
mojcica
@mojcica (1511)
• Slovenia
23 Oct 08
I did.
underdogtoo
@underdogtoo (9579)
• Philippines
23 Oct 08
Poems are great. I wrote some puerile poems in my youth. I guess everyone has a poet inside. My son does hip hop rhyming. His inner poet wants to come out too, I guess. Cheers!!
EAStanley
@EAStanley (2688)
• United States
22 Oct 08
That is very good. :) Thank you for sharing! :) Now I feel like trying to start writing again! :) Thanks! :)
mojcica
@mojcica (1511)
• Slovenia
23 Oct 08
You do that and post it as a proof :) Thanks.