half-way

Somalia
March 15, 2009 6:26am CST
climbing ropes of thoughts bridging the gap between you and me i stopped waiting for you you stopped reaching for me the moment disappeared
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• United States
15 Mar 09
I really like this poem. It creates mental images for me. I love the phrase "ropes of thoughts". Very descriptive. It is beautiful and sad.
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• Somalia
17 Mar 09
thanks.. :-) I was sad when I wrote this. It was giving about giving up on the chance at love.
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• United States
22 Mar 09
I feel your hurt and disappointment. As mentioned above, very descriptive.
• United States
22 Mar 09
the bitter sweet meaning that is exactly what it is assume new creations but what is the sense of loving the devil in that touch to feel beyond close your eyes to feel a dew drop on a rose pedal the temporal lobe is a beautiful place! www.mylot.com/biggeechy