love poems

April 6, 2009 8:53am CST
If you were a teardrop;In my eye, For fear of losing you,I would never cry And if the golden sun,Should cease to shine its light, Just one smile from you,Would make my whole world bright. second: I have searched a thousand years,And I have cried a thousand tears.I found everything I need.You are everything to me. Third: You are my life,you're my one and only dream,I love you,and to you that I mean,together for always,I hope we will be,I'll love you always
3 responses
• Philippines
6 Apr 09
nice poem. but you can use some more images rather than straight forward words. like love.. fear of losing. it will be more effective.
• China
7 Apr 09
Thank you for you advice
• United States
7 Apr 09
"love is not blind but people in love are".... "if loving you would make me a sinner, then i will gladly stay in hell"
• Singapore
6 Apr 09
the poem is normal as the way you use it.The words and expression you give out is commonly used.You should use much more phrases and images.(i agreed with the above comment.)