The Ultimate Sacrifice

United States
June 7, 2009 11:22pm CST
The Ultimate Sacrifice She stands bare before me offering what nature has preserved A treasure only few sure a thing which is sought but seldom deserved Opening up to me for the ultimate sacrifice She must not have any doubts She need not think twice Mind and soul are one as our flesh combine She is soft and gentle and content to be mine Pausing in an embrace enjoying the feel of each other. Excitment raging out of control pull back the sheets and under the cover
2 responses
@kalaga (550)
• United States
10 Jun 09
very nice.u got a way with words.i think that is what poetry is.:)enjoyed it.
1 person likes this
• United States
10 Jun 09
Thank you very much for those kind words. They are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
@reckon21 (3487)
• Philippines
8 Jun 09
Wow...is it a poem. Do you made it. The poem is good. I like the way it was written. I love poems but I have no more time reading.
1 person likes this
• United States
8 Jun 09
Yes I wrote it many years ago. Thank you for taking the time to read it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :))