Moaning

United States
July 10, 2009 8:36pm CST
Moaning, Weeping, Sweeping. Cold, Tired, Crying... Holding your hand, Looking into your eyes... The blood is there, the blood is there! You moan and try to move. I grip your hand tighter. The bullet got your heart... And mine shall soon follow....
2 responses
clutterbug
@clutterbug (1051)
• United States
11 Jul 09
That's good dramatic stuff! I hope we don't have nightmare's tonight with all the blood and gore (not Al Gore) between us, lol..
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Swashbuckle
@Swashbuckle (305)
• United States
11 Jul 09
ewww, I wouldn't want to sleep with him! *lol* I hope you don't have the nightmares, I go to sleep to police documentaries about serial killers and rapists. Don't ask me why...0_o* I was inspired by your fishing trip poem. I totally forgot to mention that.
dmark5
@dmark5 (41)
• Portugal
11 Jul 09
For sure you have a talent in you, amazing :'O
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Swashbuckle
@Swashbuckle (305)
• United States
11 Jul 09
Thank you. I dabble mostly in poetry. Creative writing is my poison of choice! *lol*