Continue my story!!! Make it good!

@urzicutza (1973)
Romania
November 11, 2009 6:14pm CST
So here is the thing,i was wandering about doing something fun here on mylot,and just came in to my head that we should do something together and to be funny. So here is the thing: i start a story and u have to finish it! THe idea is that when i will read the answers to this story i want it to be really great! so do you best! One morning i was staring out of my window when i first sow the big car parked outside my house.What was he doing out there ? it was 5 o`clock in the morning!I reached my phone and dialed his number,He looked at his phone and he did not picked up.What was he doing,i did not understand ,until i realized that he was not alone. From this point u have to continue the story! Make it good!
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@smedtra (77)
• Turkey
12 Nov 09
'Damn you Michael' i cursed and tried to focus to the details. It was really not like him to act like that, also the man near him was not like the type he likes to hang out. Michael was a real estate broker on a well known firm. You know those types, wearing expensive suits, riding nice cars and after a half hours talk they can sell you a filthy hut as Birmingham Palace. But apart from his job, Michael, my cousin, was a decent guy that you can trust. With curiosity i started to examine the guy near him. He seemed like he's on early thirties or late twenties, wearing a black leather jacket, a pair of jeans and cowboy boots. Black short hair and a stubble, you'd tell 'this guy is dangerous at first glance'. But there was something about his smile and his grey eyes. That expression in his face, i do not know, i felt like i could trust him with my life...
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@urzicutza (1973)
• Romania
12 Nov 09
i like it you really did a great job!however i would been expecting something more deep,and more interesting to read.
• Turkey
12 Nov 09
Well i stopped on purpose, so that someone else can continue from the point i stopped. But seems everyone skipped.
• Philippines
12 Nov 09
I wondered who the other guy in the car was so I ran to the balcony to get a better view. It was Luke my boyfriend - "what is he doing out with my cousing Mike?" I thought. It looks like they were chatting and laughing then Luke bent over Mike..."are they kissing?!?" I was frantic. I looked closer and I saw what seemed like a pair of sharp tooth from Luke's mouth... (nice idea coming up with this fun stuff..)
@mzz663 (2775)
• United States
12 Nov 09
I decided I wanted to get a closer look so I went downstairs with a pair of binoculars & zoomed in and what I seen amazed me!! Luke was writing on the back of an envelope with his mouth!! I didn't know Luke knew how to write with his hands! Yikes! what did this mean? where were Lukes hands? Why wasn't Mike paying attention to what Luke was writing? I put the binoculars down, grabbed my jacket and went sneaking out the door and went to the side of the car as quietly as I possibly could. I stood by the car in shock, I couldn't move at all because of what I seen, Luke & Mike didn't even notice I was there, they were so busy_______________________________________________.......
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