A poem I wrote after my Daddy Died

By Liz
United States
February 27, 2010 3:39pm CST
Amazing grace how sweet the sound, the world was bright you see. Rose colored glasses hit the ground, please give them back to me. The yellow brick road, I once was told would lead to victory. The tin man tried to steal my heart, now he's after me. Poppy fields dark and gray, I think I'll take a rest, Lay back for a while, try to forget about life and all it's tests. If you should find the glasses, the ones I left behind, don't look through them, The bright sunshine, if lost you'll loose your mind.
2 responses
• United States
31 Mar 10
aw im sorry that happened to you. poetry is a good way of expressing yourself. your poetry sounds amazing. all poetry comes from the heart and it is very beautiful. it is good to hear poetry every day.
@shibham (16977)
• India
28 Feb 10
Hi dasie. Its great. I feel that u are highly influenced with the great theory of wordsworth" back to the nature". Here i have found a hidden sound of existencialism. Thanks for sharing. Once more.