Peoms, let me know what you think..

United States
November 16, 2006 10:13am CST
I just wanted to see what some of you thought about something I wrote.. it's called "Talking To Dale" I close my eyes and I see you there. Your big and strong, this isn't fair. I remember how you used to drive. I wish you were here, you were still alive. You ment so much to so many fans. We all know you must have had big plans. Jr. was up and coming along. He was doing good, he was looking strong. Now he is working as hard as he can. I'm happy to say i'm such a big fan. I know looking down you must be proud. Jr. seems good, he's not in a cloud. Thank You for being a wonderful man. I'll keep you in my heart and always be a fan. I entered it at poetry.com and it will be in a book coming out next year..
3 responses
@icequeen (2840)
• Canada
26 Nov 06
This is nice. Good luck with your entry. I am familiar with them too....
1 person likes this
• United States
26 Nov 06
Thank You...
• United States
26 Nov 06
I think your poem is very good. I like poetry.com because you keep all rights to your poems and its copyrighted by listing there. Good Job and keep writing!
1 person likes this
• United States
26 Nov 06
Thank You very much. I too like poetry.com. I sent this one to them. I will send the other one I have to them when I can think of what to call it..
@samsonskola (3357)
• United States
25 Nov 06
what a wonderful tribute to Sr.. I love it...
1 person likes this
• United States
26 Nov 06
Thank You.. I have another one that I wrote, and I will put it on here when I get a chance... I haven't came up with a name for the new one yet..