What would you feel after reading this?
May 25, 2010 1:59pm CST
Just want to make this short. A man together with her daughter was traveling home in a deep narrow steep-sided road. His dad was tired driving all day while his 4 year daughter sitting beside him was playing with her doll. After several minutes, the daughter told his dad that she needs to get emptied but her dad told her to wait since they are driving away from the city. The road is steep and gorge and he can't look for a nice spot where he could stop the car and let her daughter urinate but his daughter keeps on complaining so her dad stopped the car and instructed her daughter to get emptied near the side of the road. When her daughter was about to pee, her dad pushed her off the road and she fell down the ravine. And he went home alone. After two years, his wife gave birth to a very healthy boy and he was very happy spending most of his time with his son. One day, he decided to bring his son to a movie while his wife is out for work. While they were driving the same road he had with her 4 year old daughter years ago, his son told him to stop because he needs to pee. When the boy went out of the car, his dad was behind him. When the boy was about to pee, he asked his dad, "dad will you ever pushed me again?"
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25 May 10
The concept can be adopted to a screen play. Is this your work? Nice story. Sometimes i like to write short stories cuz i like to work on a short animation project. My problem is i don't have anyone voicing over the characters and i'm not a good voice actor. I'll take this into account if you don't mind. Maybe i can make something out of it.
25 May 10
I heard this from my dad I few years ago. I guess this was an old story that my dad heard when he was young. I am not sure though if this was true. Well if you want to create something out of it then I guess there's nothing wrong. You're kinda weird huh..hehe