Dark Forest

@rifnee (1713)
Indonesia
February 20, 2011 7:09am CST
Where would you take this soul? Taste the dark forest again? Ah .. I was dragged into the dark forest again Anger and indignation gathered there They asked me to dance in spite of the lake My feet are stained, nor a pair of hands Rhythm hatred immerses me into basic revenge I sank into the ocean bitterness Until the music when a misunderstanding of this voice? I'm tired of playing around here I hope the angels of God to save me back to my natural Where there is only me and the water there forgiveness
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8 responses
• India
26 Nov 11
Wonderful poem, Thanks for sharing I think we are more secured in Jungles , the animals are harmless compared to men Have a nice day ahead. Professor ‘@Bhuwan@’. .
@cream97 (29175)
• United States
17 Sep 11
Hi, rifnee. I like your poem. It carries my mind to a million places. You have explained what a Dark Forest really means. I love your poem!
@didi13 (2927)
• Romania
5 Jun 11
When desire gets stronger and you have no reasons to fight, you have found true pain. Pain that raise your eyes and not let you breathe. Stomach off, hurt and betrayal tears sting wound. Peak. Depression. Blinds closed, wet sheets and stained mascara. Misery and longing. Miss and rain. When you reach out to touch one last dream, and hopelessly untenable. You hate those nightmares that you have at night, when being able to escape, hate them for some time now had beautiful dreams, was love and fantasy, were butterflies in my stomach and love and kisses in the snow and snowballs. He remained missing and .. nothing.
@najibdina29 (1309)
• Indonesia
14 Mar 11
Forgiveness is not granted because the person who requested deserves to be forgiven. No one deserves to be forgiven. Forgiveness is an act of love, mercy and grace. Forgiveness is a decision not to hold grudges for whatever a person did to you
@nakula2009 (2325)
• Indonesia
25 Feb 11
Slowly I wash the body Dirty muddy eliminate fatigue enjoy the tranquility When my eyes open all of a sudden .... out of nowhere a speck of light .... small slowly .... swell I gasped whether what I think between uncertain and happy between free and carefree
• Indonesia
24 Feb 11
Difficult to palpate the full meaning of the life journey of a coffee maker, as though being located in an ocean of bitterness, while enjoying music misunderstanding. but there is still hope: "anger and indignation gathered there" means that now you've become a patient person because of anger and annoyance is you leave, there! I can not do much here, hopefully the angels heard complaining ...! if "I wanted to go home", do not be a "butterfly butterfly paper" greeting
@globaldoc (860)
• Philippines
21 Feb 11
The words here are so beautiful, and somewhat inspiring.
@gengeni (3308)
• Indonesia
20 Feb 11
Difficult to palpate the full meaning of the life journey of a coffee maker (the Cofee maker), as though being located in an ocean of bitterness, while enjoying music misunderstanding. but there is still hope: "anger and indignation gathered there" means that now you've become a patient person because of anger and annoyance is you leave, there! I hope the angels of God to save me back to my natural where there is only me and the water there forgiveness I can not do much here, hopefully the angels heard complaining ...! if "I wanted to go home", do not be a "butterfly butterfly paper" greeting