how to make my reviews on slice the pie better?

@txgrl21 (819)
United States
May 11, 2011 12:28pm CST
Hi mylotters! I have been working on Slice the Pie and for a while I was making .10 per review but I could not get past it and now I am back down to .02. I am trying to change them up and give some quality imput but I need some advice. I am not much of a writer either so please if anyone has some tips help!!
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