a song by me..

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this is a song i wrote about 2 years ago. it's called "you're ok." it isn't one of my best, and i suppose it isn't as good without actually being able to hear it either.. but a few people had said i should post some of my songs.. so here goes.. 1. thoughts are never noticed easily, trusting only whats unspoken to me, gets me, into, trouble. moving slowly toward a moment, trapped in time with blurry content, will do nothing, but burst my bubble. clenched fists, down by my side, trying to run, yet not trying to hide, does nothing for, you. here i am, standing screaming, barely moving while my world keeps spinning, begging, to hear what you'd, do. chorus. you, stop my breath where it stands, and you freeze my heart to the core, you take every piece of pain that i've felt, and you lay it flat on the floor, you move my soul to a reach unknown, and leave me, a battered broken mess, and i'm hanging on, swinging on hooks, waiting for you to say yes. yes, you're ok. 2. you never fail to make me breathless, a feeling that ends up leaving me restless, your laughter through my tears, pure, torment. but what if i took a step out of line? and went a little too far this time? and threw myself, right out of this, moment? would you already be there, standing waiting? taking your time while my heart starts tainting? with arms outstretched, right on, cue? or would you play the victim under pressure? and twist the knife, another turn for good measure? and through yourself down there, too? chorus. you stop my breath where it stands, and you freeze my heart to the core, you take every piece of pain i've felt, and lay it, flat on the floor, you move my soul to a reach unknown, and leave me, a battered broken mess, and i'm hanging on, twisting on hooks, waiting for you to say yes, yes, you're ok. bridge. why, do you burn my bridges? and why, do you tease my soul? and why, are you all i've never wanted? but all now i've come to know? why, are you anything but perfect? but my flaws are largest when compared? and why does it hurt me more, when you finally act like you ever cared? chorus. you stop my breath where it stands, and you freeze my heart to the core, you take every piece of pain i've felt, and lay it flat on the floor, you move my soul to a reach unknown, and leave me, a battered broken mess, and i'm hanging on, swinging on hooks, waiting for you to say yes, yes we're ok. so that's one of my songs. i hope you like it and i hope some people get it and can relate. but if you don't like it, thats ok too, because it's kind of crap. lol!