My Poem for YOU :)

@jaiho2009 (39001)
Philippines
August 10, 2011 3:57am CST
Unceasing Love I can hear the wind blows whispering my name as I watched the leaves sway, I saw you hands reaching to hug me my ever dearest. Your voice is sweeter than my favorite love song that gives melody to my silent nights, And rhyme with each and every beatings of my heart. You laughter is louder than thunder and lighting, Enough to drowned my sorrow and pain. Your gentle kiss and unceasingly love gently swept me with gladness. And give me hope that true love comes once in every lifetime. Your stare shines like star across the sky mesmerizing deep in my soul. Your breath entwined with mine as your body becomes mine. And brings me to a place where angels dared to go with shyness but excitement. Your unceasingly love filled me because our love is born to shine forever. Emotion flows freely when you are in love. Have you ever written a poem for someone you love? Share my feelings dear mylotters jaiho® 8/10/2001 4:56pm PT (Wednesday)
16 responses
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
hi jai, Another nice piece from you I am not a poet in fact I don't have a talent when it comes to this But once I was inspired to make one for a person sad that I was not given a chance to give it to him Thanks about last night I was so HAPPY
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
you were not given the chance to give it to him? wow...so it's left unread by the concern? I guess this will make a good one "The Unread Love letter of Pronounced Love" you are happy because you give me that drink
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
yes it was unread well maybe he doesn't deserve that one I did not give you that drink it was pearl still drunk?
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
grrr....is Pearl still there?
@saphrina (31739)
• South Africa
10 Aug 11
Great sweetie. I just think we will put a silencer on the laughter though. Imagine the scare you will have when it's louder than thunder. Just kidding, i like it.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
dear saphy oh yeah,that would surely be scary thank you thank sweetheart,I know you will never let me down
@saphrina (31739)
• South Africa
10 Aug 11
Well, uumm okay then.
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
so in love?
@dpk262006 (56482)
• Delhi, India
10 Aug 11
Hi Jai! Once again an outstanding poem. Loved it.. You are a talented poetess.. Keep it up. BTW, who was your muse?
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
hello small kid, I know you will always give me these kind words to boost my ego Muse?..what do you mean dear? jaiho®
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@dpk262006 (56482)
• Delhi, India
10 Aug 11
You deserve all the accolades and appreciation. Muse means - who was your inspiration, who prompted you to write this beautiful poem.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
Someone out there - but is so insensitive to feel what i want to convey
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@visavis (5945)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
Nice poem look like you remembering someone which his memories still in your mind and heart. Like what you said here. You laughter is louder than thunder and lighting, Enough to drowned my sorrow and pain. Your gentle kiss and unceasingly love gently swept me with gladness. And give me hope that true love comes once in every lifetime. But be aware in the last sentence "true love come ONCE in every lifetime" .... KUHA MO. LOL
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
kuhang-kuha jud bai -(i got it buddy) No- this is not for the memory of the past... This is inspired by someone at present. jaiho®
@visavis (5945)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
Wow that's a good news, I hope that inspiration and become reality in your real life and will continue until the 2nd conference so that your love life complete. But I need to memorize such poem so that if ever I will be there, that poem I can render it in the group, what do you think?
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
uh uh....never mind... Besides...I can only express my feelings here,not sure if it will come into reality. I am hoping,and hope it will soon come true...i never lost hope
@inertia4 (27713)
• United States
15 Aug 11
I like this poem but I do have to say one thing. I sort of laughed when I read the line that his laughter was louder then thunder, Woah. That would hurt my ears. I would change that line. Other then that I think it is wonderful. Sorry for laughing at that line.
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
16 Aug 11
hello intertia, It's fine my friend...I need criticism to improve my work/s. Anyway..that's how poem are made of, there is certain lines called "poetical lines" words rhyming and sometimes sounds grammatical error :P Thanks for your appreciation and have a good day my friend...check my other poem as well jaiho®
@inertia4 (27713)
• United States
17 Aug 11
I understand. I will check out your other poem. You should post them on a poetry site. You also have a good day.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
17 Aug 11
oh...this is my own interest which I created accidentally 3 yrs ago and again by accident I stumbled upon. And I decided to use this interest...it's my username anyway
@toniganzon (53346)
• Philippines
11 Aug 11
I've written lots of poems when i was younger to those people who made my heart skipped a beat. Nowadays i couldn't find myself writing poems anymore. Probably my heart stopped jumping up and down. It's not that i've lost feeling that emotion but it's more like i've already reached the peak, heart is no longer going down.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
11 Aug 11
hello toni, I also stopped writing long ago,but someone inspires me to write again and I am glad because I was able to have my articles published on the other site. Enough for me to start writing again. have a good day jaiho®
@toniganzon (53346)
• Philippines
11 Aug 11
It's great that you have found that inspiration. May that person continue to inspire you.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
11 Aug 11
@maharlikah (1045)
• Philippines
14 Aug 11
You sound very poetic today dear amiga. The last time I wrote my only poem was in high school. It's been a long time but I still remeber it was in my Math notebook and I wrote it using a red ballpen. Heheh Well, the contents, I forgot already.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
14 Aug 11
dear amiga, It's been a long time also that I haven't wrote a poem. Now I feel this urge to make one,then two and maybe more are coming Why not try to write one also and share it with us. and..who knows maybe admin will post a contest for poem writing have a good day :) jaiho®
@neildc (17253)
• Lapu-Lapu City, Philippines
12 Aug 11
so lovely poem this is sis. and i love it. i think i have written a few poems for the girls i loved before.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
14 Aug 11
hello neil, Thanks for the appreciation dear brother... and what...girls you love before as in girls with s sis, jaiho®
@myfb2009 (8304)
• Malaysia
12 Aug 11
Hi Jaiho, i am not a good poem writer but inspired to drop by and give you some of my opinion. Your poem is very lovely and had filled my day with smile after reading it. It seems indeed your heart was filled with love when you compost this poem. By reading this poem, i can feel the loving heart from you towards the person that you love. Hope that person will appreciate your poem if he ever get the chance to read it. Thanks for sharing it here, my friend.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
14 Aug 11
hello myfb, Thanks for the appreciation. I am truly inspired and when you are inspired you can write with overflowing joy and words voluntarily express their own meaning. i hope that,that someone will feel what my heart meant to say have a good day dear jaiho®
• United States
10 Aug 11
Nice poem :)
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
11 Aug 11
hello jbyjby, thanks for the appreciation have a good day and welcome to mylot jaiho®
@adhyz82 (36263)
• Indonesia
10 Aug 11
write a love letter?? i had ever made it for my friend, but i never send the letter for her
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
hello adhyz, Why not try to send it to her now? have a good day jaiho®
@sjvg1976 (18407)
• Delhi, India
10 Aug 11
Hello Jaiho, Nice poem i will tell this one to my wife. But you did not tell me you are poetess too otherwise i would have bought some love poems from you to please my wife when she gets angry.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
hello sjvg, Thanks a lot... oh sure you can always asks me when you need to woe your wife again...(hehehe) I think I can make a good business for this... i will write poems and you will be my manager jaiho®
@magicchou (163)
• China
10 Aug 11
Hi,jaiho. You are so sweet. I love your poem except for this line "You(r) laughter is louder than thunder and lighting"-A little bit scaring, weird. But as a whole, I really love it. I never wrote one cuz writing a poem is no easy job no matter in Chinese(my mother lnguage) or in English. So I think you really did a good job! Here, I would like to share my own story: When I was a freshmen in college, I like a girl in my class. Then,I found I love her but not like, But I'm shy, and I keep this love in my mind, until The 2nd semester of sophomore I send her an E-mail telling her“ I love you" But, but, but... You know the result. After a few days, I find it rewarding. Anyway, I have told her the love deep in my heart. ONCE AGAIN, THX FOR SHARING YOUR POEM. I APPRECIATE IT.
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@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
hello magic, Hahaha... that's how poem works my friend...words rhyming So I can guess that the email got rewards thanks for the appreciation and have a good day always jaiho®
@shibham (17025)
• India
10 Aug 11
Hmmmm.... nice poem and thinking indeed. I have written many poems but regarding the negative side of love. hahahaha "you told me give me your heart..... i told take it as it your part.... now you are in a night of escort..... i am drinking here losing my effort....." have a nice day.
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
shiby, you told me give me your heart..... - i never gave you my heart huh? i told take it as it your part.... - why should i take you as part of me ? now you are in a night of escort..... I have my own escort i am drinking here losing my effort....." ask bhaby to drink with you sis, jaiho®
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
Bhaby is that me?
@shibham (17025)
• India
10 Aug 11
Here you is neither didi nor bhaby. Its a poem on whom i loved.
@secretbear (19464)
• Philippines
12 Aug 11
Hi jaiho! That's a very nice poem! I used to write short poems, too back in high school when I was in love or just inspired. And yes, I used to write love poems. But there were some wholesome poems I was able to write, too out of boredom and inspiration. There was a poem I created that showed how thankful I was when I studied in a far university because I was able to avoid my friend's attempt to court me. lol There was also a poem I wrote about how bored I was during my first few weeks in that university and that I even mentioned a lizard in it. lol I don't write any poems anymore though. But I guess, the ability to write in rhymes sometimes come out of me on certain occasions. lol
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
14 Aug 11
hello secretbear, You can always try to write a few lines,esp when you feel like writing and words came into your mind. I stopped writing poems long time ago..till someone gives me inspiration to start writing again. thanks for the appreciation and have a good day my friend jaiho®
@rambansal (575)
• India
10 Aug 11
You made me happy - you love someone, Tell me if there is something undone. My child, life is too long to bear alone, You are right when you chose to on the throne. Feel my hand on your head, Until all your fears are shed. My blessings are red carpet to you, When I see the couple of you. Anyway, good efforts, my dear, Keep it up but with more car for grammar. All the best, my child.
@jaiho2009 (39001)
• Philippines
10 Aug 11
hello ram, Thanks for the blessings. My grammar...goodness,I need to enroll back to school jaiho®