Beats of a Broken Heart
By Ram Bansal
@rambansal (574)
India
August 12, 2011 3:40pm CST
I did not abuse you -
Called you a monkey or a donkey,
I did not accuse you -
Of flirting, or of hurting,
Because I adore you,
Because I love you.
But you have every right to do that
Being a free bird,
With a flower in one hand,
In the other a sword.
I adore you more than I love you,
My adoration is very old,
Love got recently unfold.
You can go in chosen way,
My love is lost -
Let adoration watch you gay.
I may live or die,
I may weep or cry,
Will never bother you, make you try,
For I am just a toy to pass time,
While you move on your path to a rhyme.
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8 responses
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
13 Aug 11
hello ram,
Thu my heart is aching due to the beat of a broken heart, I can still manage to laugh with this poem 
how come monkey and donkey conspired to break someone's heart (hahaha- just kidding)
have a great weekend- nice one 
jaiho®
how come monkey and donkey conspired to break someone's heart (hahaha- just kidding)
have a great weekend- nice one
jaiho®
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
13 Aug 11
How I wish to be a kid again...carefree and full of innocence.
@rambansal (574)
• India
13 Aug 11
Laugh, my child, laugh heartily. And cheer up the broken heart with your laughter. Great weekends are for you, children - playing and enjoying. We enjoy seeing you play.
@SIMPLYD (90722)
• Philippines
13 Aug 11
That's a very nice poem of yours rambansal. 
It's full of emotions and i can sense a bitter and sad emotion there. Is it how you feel towards a girl. Well, i hope not. 
It's full of emotions and i can sense a bitter and sad emotion there. Is it how you feel towards a girl. Well, i hope not. @SIMPLYD (90722)
• Philippines
15 Aug 11
Well, try looking for another girl. Someone who can understand your feelings and will not ever leave you.
@rambansal (574)
• India
13 Aug 11
Yes full of emotions, bitter and sad. Your hope is right, she is gone away leaving me dry.
@JoyfulOne (6232)
• United States
12 Aug 11
That is really nicely written Ram! I had no idea you were a poet too. I am sincerely hoping your lady that you've been writing about didn't break your heart!! I know that somewhere you will meet somebody who is everything that you've ever dreamed of and will feel exactly the same way about you. And, lol, please!! don't be like your American friend here and completely give up! Wishing you happiness in the future :-)
@rambansal (574)
• India
13 Aug 11
No, my dear Joy, I am not a poet. It is only my sensitivity which expresses my state of mind. Yes. dear, she is gone away, I don't know whether my heart is broken or not, but I am feeling depressed. I am not giving up and flame of hope still burns in me, as you said, "....somewhere you will meet somebody...."
@rambansal (574)
• India
13 Aug 11
PS. About your hope of meeting somebody, I have another post here 'Mirages', for you to please take note of.
@lologirl2021 (5542)
• United States
12 Aug 11
Im guessing that you like to write poetry. Maybe you should check into publishing your own work as the one you have written is very good and so many people can relate to it im sure. It has alot of meaning in it about someones life and a erlationship they might have in there life and are still holding onto the grudges of it.
Good luck with all the poetry work.
@rambansal (574)
• India
13 Aug 11
My dear lolo, I don't know whether it is poetry. I only know this is very natural expression of my broken heart, without any effort from my side. Thanks, if you feel related to the wordings.
Such a nice poem over here rambansal!
Much respect,
edsss17@rambansal (574)
• India
13 Aug 11
Hey, cute baby, this is not for your tender heart. Cheer up and leave such foolish hardships to we old useless persons.
@chicksdigscars (5483)
•
16 Aug 11
is this about a broken heart? or about loving someone now? i dodn't really fully understand.. it is lovely tho!
@srmailtosr (426)
• India
13 Aug 11
That was a good poem . It is really the beats of a broken heart. Why don't you publish some poems in magazines. It will definitely get wide acclaim. I am sure on it.. So keep on writing.
