i think it`s better now : ALONE
August 14, 2011 4:36am CST
Probably better that way for me I am alone in the corner of this city I close all my heart for love for temporary although in my deeply heart, i want to cry Please, do not come and say hello only make me wounded Please delete my name Please erase all love stories ever Leave me alone Alone without you anymore Although I must admit, is only you who I really cared My heart did not want to find, substitute yourself
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15 Aug 11
Its quite hard to let go of the love, one can never forget but can continue in moving forward in life. Go out with friends, try be more social and eventually in sometime the love still be there but no more hurt.Love those who loves you. I hope you get over this soon as its quite painful.
14 Aug 11
How nice is your composition. I like this and really feel that you want to be alone; Do you feel inlove before and had the problem with your lovelife so this happen that you want to be alone. Stay away from you the one you only love. This is really hurt coz i have been there since when i was young.
14 Aug 11
Oh,so sad to hear buddy. Do not break your heart.Try to get another one who will love you more and can not live without you. Anyways very nice post friend,I liked it too much.Keep writing like this.Really nice to read and feel.It touches my mind ans soul.Thanks for posting such a lovely post. Cheers
14 Aug 11
Oh. such a sad sad piece! That's what I also feel when it was the first I got heart broken! But I moved on in such a short period of time and I think its good.. No, don't close your heart. Yes, it hurts but still remain your heart open as you may not know when to fall in love. You may regret it when you find someone who loves you and you love back but your heart is close! COnfusing eh? Just a piece of silly advice!
17 Aug 11
Very moving piece adhyz82. It is very nicely written and touching to read. It appears to me that you may have come to the acceptance stage of your grief and may be soon ready to put the past behind you and move forward. I wish all the best for you.