Once in every life .. :)

Hi Jai! What a superlative poetry! It is very meaningful, deep and scintillating. Your poem tells about the crux of our life and it tells that life is a journey where we keep facing happy and sad moments. However, we should move ahead. Very well written. Full marks to you.

Hi my friend, Is this poem or song... I gues it is a poem that always tackle our memories in the past whether bad or good. Actually, it is only ONCE in our life may be twice, thrice or more depends of our situation. Like love in our heart might be in first try failed, second failed and more but still remain love forever..

hi jaiho beautiful poetic and makes me remember the man with the black wavy hair, the impish grin, the sparkling eyes daring me to diagree with him. Garland Hatleyand you are: I suttered and stammerd Patsie clark. then as I watched him start to make the surgical bed he had been sent to help me, the feelinggrew. there were bells ringsin, spaks flying, music only I could hear,.Six weeks later we were Mr and MrsHatley. Now I opnly have memories and of co urse my 52 year old son who has curly dark hair and a grin and sparkling eyes too.We were married 33 years, ups and downs we weathered them together with a lot of love and much laughter/so yes I have laughed and I have cried seeing our little daughter being buried and knowing I would never hear her say pick baby up mommy,.Lisa liked pcakees. She was brain damaged and a gorgeous child so pretty and loving most people did not realize she wold never grow beyond five years in mentality.but we loved her with all our hearts and there was laughter, much laughter, there were tears and we keep our relationship 33 years, yes I still miss him. bu t I have memories "all alone in the moonlight" rember that Scene in the play Cats? the name of the song was Memories. I cried as I said goodbye and he could not hear me.I said it was not supposed to end like this.You promised we would grow old together. but it wasnot meant to be. I had to say goodbye but hecould not hear me any more.

I am really confused.... by which inspiration my did becomes a poet and lyricist. and who is this in avatar? have a nice day.

Awesome sweetie. I like it.

hi jaiho, We can live only once so I should eat a lot Love stays in the heart of a person if that person knows how to love We live one so live it to the fullest miss yah

Hi jaiho2009 The poem is really beautiful. You are really a great poet. Keep it up.

Yes friend this is a fact of life once in every life mixed emotions like cry and happiness. Laughter and cry both are necessary in life otherwise we feel bored. Your discussion is so nice my dear sis. Your profile pic is also nice. Yes this is true we can hold anything.

Thank you for the good wishes, i wish you the same. I call your poet a motherly or earthly poet. I do agree that only love will stay for forever

Jai beti Professor was telling me, he can see a great poetess in you. Why don't you publish your poems, stories with some international publisher? Blessings from Maa Happy posting, cheers. Kalyani

Such an amazing piece my lady! You're right. Only love can stay forever.. Wish could find that pure love soon enough! :D

A good composition, of thoughts and words. Children grow so fast, they behave like adults so soon. Keep it up, you have a future. My blessings.

once in every life.... it is very good to see all emotions of life in one proem, life is once do enjoy it. i enjoyed your poem,expecting more poems from you, have a great day friend

Truly talented and gifted people just don't often realise what a talent they really have. This is a lovely and heartwarming poem and you have a great talent!

Hello Jaiho, You seem to be a poetess these days as i have seen lot of poems of yours on MYLOT lately.And most of them revolves around love.Keep it Up!!!