A Broken Angel with Jaiho -post Valentine Break-up ? :p

By Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
Philippines
February 26, 2012 2:30am CST
It's been few months since I last posted a discussion on this "interest". I just want to share one of my poem. Once again,let me try to trap you inside my world. (just kidding) :p "A BROKEN ANGEL" A lonely face full of sadness, Glaring with empty eyes, a blank face, Shut lips no smile traced. A broken angel is in my head. A broken wing of shattered feathers, Limp and shudder on croaked trails. Fly no more my angel wish, Inside my mind screaming out to leave. Reach my hands and I will fly with you, Hold on to my shoulders as we walk on through. Throw your broken dreams in outer space, Be free from grief cheer up with glee. Broken angel is no more to see, She leaves no trace conceive by death, In her destiny, she lives in peace. Do someone regret for a broken angel who wept? Dedicated to all broken hearts who never stops beating in the name of Love Have a great day everyone jaiho® - a confused poetess? -NOT ANYMORE 2-26-2012 4:28PM PT Sunday
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10 responses
theSids
@thesids (22180)
• Bhubaneswar, India
26 Feb 12
hi di No comments on broken hearts... they call me a troll here when I posted one on my godmoms. The poem is great and I want you to get your sets of poems published. You can pay me a commission (of course a years pack of Dairy Milk will be fine) for suggesting you this novel idea and also market your books here in India... and if not... if not.... then.... I guess I will settle with a 6 months deal
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
27 Feb 12
hi jaiho and he never asked for chocolates? lol
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
26 Feb 12
sids, A year supply of Diary Milk sure...let's make a deal then
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Ram Bansal
@rambansal (574)
• India
26 Feb 12
Jane dear, what is all this. You made me to feel very deeply for you. Don't you see any remedy to your sorrow, made by you through chasing a mirage.
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
26 Feb 12
hello ram, Thanks for your concern, I really appreciate it
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shibham
@shibham (16977)
• India
26 Feb 12
Nice compose didi... mind-blowing.
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
26 Feb 12
shiby, mind blowing wow...thanks
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Professor2010
@Professor2010 (20162)
• India
26 Feb 12
Jane beti You are NOT a confused poetess, but a rare poetess with so much talent, i am sure you will shine one day.. Hugs from Dada
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
26 Feb 12
hello dada, I wish I could hugs to you and maa
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inertia4
@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
2 Mar 12
You do have a way with words my friend. That was a wonderful poem and well put together. You should look into publishing some of them or getting them on a website. I have two really good sites where you could post them on. And you should think about writing a poetry book.
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
3 Mar 12
hello intertia, Thanks for the appreciation and I am interested with those sites. Kindly send me thru PM Have a great weekend
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inertia4
@inertia4 (27961)
• United States
16 Mar 12
I will send you the links to those sites. But you do not get paid though. But you do get exposure. I will send them now.
ajk111
@ajk111 (2495)
•
26 Feb 12
this touched my heart such feeling you impart my time i do not mind being disturbed when i am moved by the written word your gift is great as a poet and i think everyone should know it.
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
26 Feb 12
hello ajk, your sentence rhymes and thanks for the appreciation have a good day
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
27 Feb 12
hi jaiho that's beautiful and makes my heart soar on a chilly February morning. You are withut doubt the best mylot poet going. love your writing. from hatley
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
27 Feb 12
dear Hatley, Oh thanks for the compliment ma'am...
maharlikah
@maharlikah (1045)
• Philippines
17 Mar 12
Hello dear amiga! What a very nice poem! You are now a certified poetess :-) I'm glad your back. Leaving online things behind as of the moment but except mL. :-) So still here. I wanna be here and stay here longer. Sometimes I am just out of words to say.
bhabycatch013
@bhabycatch013 (9150)
• Philippines
1 Mar 12
hi jai, It's Fire prevention month now No broken hearts you are really a good poet love yah
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
1 Mar 12
but you're still so much in love
viju0410
@viju0410 (2286)
• India
29 Feb 12
Hi, Nice poem with a warm touch. I appreciate your talents but I have no comments to the broken hearts here and I would say better luck next time……. If at all there is another chance..Where is the collection of your poems? Could u share, pl? Take care.
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Jane
@jaiho2009 (39142)
• Philippines
29 Feb 12
hello viju, Thanks for the appreciation.. You can follow me through this link.. this one is not updated..but you can check me from this link http://juny423-lovepoemsandpromises.blogspot.com/ have a good day :)