A Broken Angel with Jaiho -post Valentine Break-up ? :p
February 26, 2012 2:30am CST
It's been few months since I last posted a discussion on this "interest". I just want to share one of my poem. Once again,let me try to trap you inside my world. (just kidding) :p "A BROKEN ANGEL" A lonely face full of sadness, Glaring with empty eyes, a blank face, Shut lips no smile traced. A broken angel is in my head. A broken wing of shattered feathers, Limp and shudder on croaked trails. Fly no more my angel wish, Inside my mind screaming out to leave. Reach my hands and I will fly with you, Hold on to my shoulders as we walk on through. Throw your broken dreams in outer space, Be free from grief cheer up with glee. Broken angel is no more to see, She leaves no trace conceive by death, In her destiny, she lives in peace. Do someone regret for a broken angel who wept? Dedicated to all broken hearts who never stops beating in the name of Love Have a great day everyone jaiho® - a confused poetess? -NOT ANYMORE 2-26-2012 4:28PM PT Sunday
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• Bhubaneswar, India
26 Feb 12
hi di No comments on broken hearts... they call me a troll here when I posted one on my godmoms. The poem is great and I want you to get your sets of poems published. You can pay me a commission (of course a years pack of Dairy Milk will be fine) for suggesting you this novel idea and also market your books here in India... and if not... if not.... then.... I guess I will settle with a 6 months deal
• United States
2 Mar 12
You do have a way with words my friend. That was a wonderful poem and well put together. You should look into publishing some of them or getting them on a website. I have two really good sites where you could post them on. And you should think about writing a poetry book.
29 Feb 12
Hi, Nice poem with a warm touch. I appreciate your talents but I have no comments to the broken hearts here and I would say better luck next time……. If at all there is another chance..Where is the collection of your poems? Could u share, pl? Take care.
17 Mar 12
Hello dear amiga! What a very nice poem! You are now a certified poetess :-) I'm glad your back. Leaving online things behind as of the moment but except mL. :-) So still here. I wanna be here and stay here longer. Sometimes I am just out of words to say.