Did you ever wrote a poem? What do you think of mine?

Romania
November 21, 2006 9:37am CST
An angel born from the pure light, A whispered touch over my eye, A sparkle driving trough the night, A child of sun hurried to fly; You'll never know what you have done The sweetness of your face will last Much more, until the break of dawn, Toward the future, trough the past.
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5 responses
@shali3000 (742)
• Italy
26 Nov 06
beautiful poetry,many compliments :) I enjoy writing poetries too but in Italian (my native language)
• Romania
30 Nov 06
Ok, thanks for replying.
• Romania
2 Dec 06
Thanks man.
@cr1st1nel (3567)
• Romania
22 Dec 06
When i was a little children i used to write something which i named them poetries. All the rimes i made there were just so silly without any sense. It is funny to read my creations now. Good luck!
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• Romania
26 Dec 06
Thanks for replying, take care!
@blueman (16513)
• India
30 Nov 06
nopes, never written a poem before.
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• Romania
2 Dec 06
Try to, whenever you feel inspired for whatever reasons. Thanks for replying.
@kiiizu (1901)
• Estonia
30 Nov 06
It's good, really good! I have wrote some, long time ago but in my native language, in Estonian. My English is not so good yet to write a poems.
• Romania
2 Dec 06
Thanks for replying, i to have most of my poems in my native language (romanian).
• United States
30 Nov 06
oh and is that you trying to look charming lol cute
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• Romania
30 Nov 06
Sorry but i don't understant your comment :|