Children's Story

United States
August 3, 2012 10:58am CST
If you got a chance to read my first post I stated that I have always enjoyed writing. I'd like to get your opinions on a children's story I wrote for my own. Any suggestions or comments would be greatly appreciated. http://www.authspot.com/short-stories/cassie-may-saves-the-day/
1 response
• Philippines
4 Aug 12
I read your poetic story and i got to tell you, it was very beautiful. You delivered it properly and with a style of your own, i'll let my young brother read it sometime. He he he. Anyway, I guarantee you'll do great in writing children's stories. It was very awesome to read. Cheers :D
• United States
4 Aug 12
Thank you very much. It took me a couple of weeks to get all the words together for it and I did it during my down time at work. I really enjoyed the sense of accomplishment when I finally finished it.
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• Philippines
4 Aug 12
Well, i guess you should just pat yourself in the back and say good job. Good job! :D