Sharing my poem : Dance of the Dawn

United States
November 10, 2012 3:09pm CST
Crisp is the air that is dancing around Touching all creatures without making sound Warm glowing sunbeams are piercing the sky And covering the chill that surrounds you and I Mother Nature's awake now and ready to play She whispers her greetings and opens the way With dew drops and wind gusts she touches our face It's time to be listening and not time to race. Breathe in the beauty as you exhale the night So much to be discovered in this morning's light Enjoy every second and every moment of the day Let no hour escape you without blessing the way (c) joy pachowicz aka littlefranciscan
4 responses
@Wendi81 (603)
• Indonesia
10 Nov 12
Wow, it's a beautifull poem! I think you have talent to write a poem. Keep make it!
1 person likes this
• United States
11 Nov 12
thank you Wendi... I thought i would start sharing my poetry on mylot since.. its my own original and i like someday soon to put together a book.it's good to get feedback.
@Wendi81 (603)
• Indonesia
11 Nov 12
Perhaps you can write your poem on blog. Anyway it's just advice to you, you can ignore it
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• United States
14 Nov 12
i do have a blog http://criesfromwithin.com its listed on my lot, I believe.
• China
11 Nov 12
How wonderful it is !Your poem gives us a vivid picture of dawn,where everything is full of life.The writing mirrors the writer.You are certainly the type of person that is full of spirit and effervescence.
1 person likes this
• United States
11 Nov 12
Thank you .. I share it daily on F/b as I write them. I started on mylot alot earlier than I did on Facebook; but got sidetracked away.. thank you for you thoughts on the poem ..
• China
13 Nov 12
You are welcome!Hope to see more your poems.
@Shavkat (65113)
• Philippines
11 Nov 12
That is a nice poem, I can do the same thinking. I wanted to create one, but I can't do it. I guess it is not my cup of tea.
@bloggeroo (2171)
• Philippines
11 Nov 12
You need to be inspired to turn into a poet. And in my experience, being young and in love is a great motivator for turning ordinary mortals into poets. Without passion, there is no desire nor need for poems.
1 person likes this
• United States
11 Nov 12
Poetry has no rules but to let the voice in you speak out in written format..since there are so many types its easy to find something that suits you ;)
@bloggeroo (2171)
• Philippines
10 Nov 12
Hmm. So this category is where you post your poems in myLot to get a response. I posted a sonnet (www.mylot.com/w/discussions/2717905.aspx) a few days ago and nobody seemed to notice. Maybe it's the election or something. Anyway, I like the power of poetry to persist over time. It is so indestructible once it's written.
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• United States
11 Nov 12
Well poetry is writing :)I don't know what other categories it can be but it seems to be read anywhere I put it ;)