What do you think about this poem? : The Moment I Found you

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Hi, it has been 9 years now since I made my last poem during college.... I posted it here 2009 Now I was able to make a new one, I apologize if i'm a little bit rusty with the words that I used.. Hope you guys like it, and let me know what you think! The Moment I Found You For a long time i have wandered throught the ocean of nothingness with a weak and brittled heart full of hurt and sadness Sadness from a war of lost and shattered dreams in a world were forever seems impossible to be seen through the infinite waters I surrendered to the waves, like a stone thrown to deep my heart and soul fades Slowly i drown to the pits of my cry, until the light of my heart's surface suddenly dies... but then i woke up, heart and soul whole again with a soft and warm embrace that kept me safe all over again your a stranger from the past that put back all the pieces, the serenity of my soul the one that my heart truly wishes and as i look into your eyes, never did i knew ... that MY forever will start the moment i found you...