Plz tell me which exhibition profile you prefer?
March 15, 2014 9:41pm CST
I'm writing a paper about how to write a good company profile, and these are two samples, plz tell me which one looks better and tell me why, thank you for your help!
16 Mar 14
@CountingStars Yes B is very good at convincing the reader that the exhibition is valuable. In the last sentence, the 75 companies from 16 countries might not need the word foreign because all countries are foreign to each other. Also, first paragraph might say “reputed as being one.... for over 25 years of presistent...”