Do you write poems and collect them?
By Arbenez
@Arbene (7)
Iloilo, Philippines
October 13, 2015 5:00am CST
This is one of the Poem Collections I have during my College Years. I started writing poems since high school and I decided that I should collect one and might share it someday. Well I guess this is the right moment.
HE WAS
He was my sunshine
He was my knight
He was the ache of my heart
He was the only one I want
But then, things changed
things are complicated
things are broken by tides
things are destroyed by pride
He never said goodbye
he just left in a snap
like a bubble
that popped into the sky
He left me with a broken heart
He left me with a lost pride
And left me blinded by his love
And I've been asking myself
What is he?
Where is he?
How is he?
Who is he?
A part of my past that meant to be forgotten and lose its purpose in my life.....
Poem #10 Copyright 2014
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8 responses
@poehere (15126)
• French Polynesia
14 Oct 15
Everyone loves poems and poetry and you can always find some meaning in most of what you read. I feel it is a great way to express your feeling at the time. But I also find that many people write more poetry when they have lost a love one, broken a relationship, or ended a marriage. St times I love the happy and lively poems or the ones for Halloween. I love to write Halloween poems and my granddaughter says I am the spook behind Halloween and I rock. OK but I do love Halloween poems and especially to write them.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
14 Oct 15
@Arbene It is a poem that has "features of interest" despite its technical faults - I'm not 100% with the imagery for example. I especially like the questions at the end that hint that the speaker still cares. Love has clearly not turned to hate, although in many poems of this nature that is the overall theme.
@allknowing (130066)
• India
14 Oct 15
I like writing poetry and have written a few but there are no takers here
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@intal_carl (299)
• Quezon City, Philippines
14 Oct 15
I only write Filipino poems and I already have a collection of Filipino poems which I actually write. I won tremendous awards because many peope saying that I'm really good in writing Filipino poems.
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@indexer (4852)
• Leicester, England
14 Oct 15
I actually wrote a poem yesterday - the first time for a long time! Someone on another site asked for my help and I ended up writing a poem based on her themes. When you start editing someone else's poem, that is what tends to happen!
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@lipstick2009 (1236)
• Philippines
13 Oct 15
I love poetry too. I used to be active on a website publishing my simple works. Didn't get paid enough though, lol. There's little money in poetry, unless it' s ones' passion, you will never have the patience of composing poems.
@ajosjasmine (12)
• Calicut, India
13 Oct 15
oops i am not an artist like you... But surely encourages those who do... But i don't understand why most of the artist make poem based on "lost things"
