Cold morning air

@kevin1877uk (36966)
December 27, 2015 12:48pm CST
Cold morning air, Not quite awake, Trees looking bear In this cold morning air, The sun shining brightly My eyes shut tight, Peeking as I go So as not to fall, The cold morning air Gives me a shudder, Gloves, hat, scarf Wrapped around my collar, One step, two step Three step more, Almost done, almost awake In the cold morning air. Something I wrote about 3 years ago. I know it may need some editing and more work with, first time I wrote anything like that.
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• United States
27 Dec 15
That is lovely Kev and the photo to go with it. I can feel the dampness and cold of England looking at it, as I recall.
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
27 Dec 15
Lol yeah too damp for me, the photo was taken before I wrote that back in 2013. Feburary I think it was.
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• United States
27 Dec 15
@kevin1877uk I remember how wet it was there..seemed one could not get dry even indoors lolz
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
27 Dec 15
@TiarasOceanView LOL, did you get much snow of there?
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@softbabe44 (5901)
• Vancouver, Washington
28 Dec 15
It's very good writing poetry.
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
28 Dec 15
Thank you :)
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• Vancouver, Washington
29 Dec 15
@kevin1877uk That's just the greatest thing
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
29 Dec 15
@softbabe44 How do you mean, sorry not sure what you mean.
@vandana7 (66110)
• India
27 Dec 15
Me goes. You see you are hell bent on scaring me...I might as well go.
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
27 Dec 15
Sorry didn't mean to scare you.
@garymarsh6 (14264)
• United Kingdom
27 Dec 15
Very good and I love the photo.
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
27 Dec 15
Yeah the photo goes with it :)
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@just4him (120556)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Dec 15
You did a good job with it. Perfect for the season.
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
27 Dec 15
Thank you :)
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@amnabas (10309)
• Karachi, Pakistan
27 Dec 15
Nicely written.Keep it up.
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@kevin1877uk (36966)
27 Dec 15
Thank you, glad you like it :)
@Jessicalynnt (47895)
• Centralia, Missouri
1 Jan 16
I like it, has a nice tempo