Cold morning air
By Kevin
@kevin1877uk (36988)
December 27, 2015 12:48pm CST
Cold morning air,
Not quite awake,
Trees looking bear
In this cold morning air,
The sun shining brightly
My eyes shut tight,
Peeking as I go
So as not to fall,
The cold morning air
Gives me a shudder,
Gloves, hat, scarf
Wrapped around my collar,
One step, two step
Three step more,
Almost done, almost awake
In the cold morning air.
Something I wrote about 3 years ago. I know it may need some editing and more work with, first time I wrote anything like that.
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@TiarasOceanView (70040)
• United States
27 Dec 15
That is lovely Kev and the photo to go with it.
I can feel the dampness and cold of England looking at it, as I recall.
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@kevin1877uk (36988)
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27 Dec 15
Lol yeah too damp for me, the photo was taken before I wrote that back in 2013. Feburary I think it was.
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@kevin1877uk (36988)
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27 Dec 15
@TiarasOceanView LOL, did you get much snow of there?
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@TiarasOceanView (70040)
• United States
27 Dec 15
@kevin1877uk I remember how wet it was there..seemed one could not get dry even indoors lolz
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@softbabe44 (5816)
• Vancouver, Washington
28 Dec 15
It's very good writing poetry.
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@softbabe44 (5816)
• Vancouver, Washington
29 Dec 15
@kevin1877uk That's just the greatest thing
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