B lah Sunset T u rns Terrific

All is well

By Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163781)

Garden Grove, California

January 28, 2016 7:39pm CST

Starting over lost my poem bad words naughty words Too absurd my blah sunset's turned to red gold Here o n land its tones plnkish red now glow Turning sky into a vibrant picture we all know Taking soft pinks and yellows made so bold Streaks of silvered blue globs of red gold Make it v ibrate on the pale blue back ground Catching the ohs and ahs of us around The blue has turned purplish so very bold No camera could capture all those vibrant shades It has spread farther into a gorgous ro s y gold surround I wish I had the words to make this so profound Layers of glowing blued purple and red gold are m ade.

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4 responses

@Jessicalynnt (50525)

• Centralia, Missouri

29 Jan 16

very lovely, well maybe this one is better than the lost one!

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

29 Jan 16

yes i think it is as I took more pains this time lol lol

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@zebra2222 (5269)

• United States

29 Jan 16

It is a colorful poem.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

29 Jan 16

thaks yes I waned to try to show what the colorswere aski av eo camera lol

@jstory07 (134425)

• Roseburg, Oregon

29 Jan 16

Your poem sounds very good to me.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

29 Jan 16

thanks im glad that you l iked it as I had fun writing it too

@Shiva49 (26199)

• Singapore

29 Jan 16

Nature's real beauty is beyond words or images that are caught on camera - siva

@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

29 Jan 16

yes you are so right we try but its hard to show just how vi vid the colors were

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