What Tires You?

By G
Philippines
February 12, 2016 7:14am CST
Do you ever get tired; Wanting to be retired? Do you have a lot of work; You can't even hold your fork? Do you have finances to take care of And earnings are not just enough? Do you hear a lot of annoying noise; Tempted to shout at the top of your voice? Do you have bills you need to pay; But you cannot do today? Do you need to walk another mile When you want to stop for a while? Do you have to finish a book; But also need to cook? The dog is barking and the cat meowing; But baby needs a change and is crying. You know that you have to do everything; And is scared to end up with nothing. Do you get tired that way; Wanting an escape each and every day? Did I tire you with this poetry; Wanting to ignore completely?
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13 Feb 16
I'm tired to take a rest. I just do nothing all day. The poem is good and it always remind me "work is life".
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• Philippines
13 Feb 16
Just do mylotting all day
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13 Feb 16
@nottoooldtowrite yup. I'm glad i found it today. In my spare time, I already have something to do. :)
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• Philippines
13 Feb 16
@richjohn07 oh.. so you just joined now? Welcome to myLot!
@SIMPLYD (81659)
• Philippines
15 Feb 16
I get tired walking in my stillettos to and from work , once i alighted the jeepney . I would always tell my hubby to slow down when we walk going to the jeepney stand in walking from the subdivision .
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• Philippines
15 Feb 16
That is really tiring. No pain, no gain as they say - "tiis ganda" (taking the pain to be beautiful)
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@SIMPLYD (81659)
• Philippines
15 Feb 16
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@Lucky15 (33718)
• Philippines
13 Feb 16
i think of WHO tires me, hahaha
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• Philippines
13 Feb 16
Now I am curious. So, who does?
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@Lucky15 (33718)
• Philippines
13 Feb 16
@nottoooldtowrite ahaha. them
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@Blondie2222 (22393)
• United States
13 Feb 16
I'm just tired of being sick, everything else is normal to me. Life is full of tired people lol.
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• Philippines
13 Feb 16
Aww hope you get well already.
@zebra2222 (5171)
• United States
13 Feb 16
Those are some good reasons for being tired. Yawn. I think I'll go to sleep now.
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• Philippines
13 Feb 16
Sure are. Have a good sleep.
@Gillygirl (17361)
• Sutton, England
12 Feb 16
The more I have to do, the more tired I feel. This is a poem most can relate to.
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• Philippines
12 Feb 16
True. Well I zctually just thought of those tiring instances. Mine usually is just the workload.
• United States
12 Feb 16
Some days I have so much to do it tires me
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• Philippines
12 Feb 16
So true. A long day is so exhausting.
@TRBRocks420 (81237)
• Banks, Oregon
12 Feb 16
Good poetry, but it did kind of make me tired and, I need to stay awake
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• Philippines
12 Feb 16
Drink some coffee
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@scheng1 (24748)
• Singapore
12 Feb 16
You sure are in a very negative mindset when you write it. Life can be easier. There are so many things that do not have to do. If you can eat out at times to save trouble on cooking and washing out, just do it. The more important thing is to learn about taking care of health, and to learn about investing so that you can grow your money.
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• Philippines
12 Feb 16
Well I was just thinking of possible reasons one will get tired. I always eat out on weekdays as I am alone in my rented place. So I do not go thru the hassle of cooking for myself. You are right, it is just a matter of setting one's priorites. Thank you.
@softbabe44 (5899)
• Vancouver, Washington
12 Feb 16
A good way to explain self and poetry was welcomed.
• Philippines
12 Feb 16
Well I was just thinking of what tires someone. Thanks
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• Vancouver, Washington
17 Feb 16
@nottoooldtowrite That's true about the different things that tire us out.
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@amadeo (70848)
• United States
12 Feb 16
Not sure on this.Sounds pretty negative to me.Good luck with this.
• Philippines
12 Feb 16
Aww I did not mean for it to be negative. I was just thinking of reasons for someone to get too exhausted. Maybe the effect of a long day.