A Starry NIght
@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
February 13, 2016 10:53pm CST
Serena a creature of moonbeams walked a starry night
Her childhood friend falled her in the paths of fright
She mourned for her lost hubby in the violent car crash
He Jason knew she had never before been so rash.
He found her just in tme in the rotten part of town
She went with him as she realized she was in hobo round
I don't' think Greg would l ike you living here and in fear.
Jason saw her smle and nod "
Jas lets get out of here."
He led her home and saw her into her house
Serena I love you but I will wait
She hugged him. "I feel like a louse.
Jason I do love you but its late."
epic poem part one orignal graphic and poem by P Hatley
both copyrighted 2016
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@MarymargII (12422)
• Toronto, Ontario
14 Feb 16
You have an artistic flair Patisie- I enjoyed this and am looking forward to the rest.
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@MarymargII (12422)
• Toronto, Ontario
15 Feb 16
@Hatley Don't worry- you still have the ideas and possibilities in your head so go for it now and again.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
15 Feb 16
Thanks glad you liked it I remembered this from the poss I lost n Bub blews.
@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
14 Feb 16
very fitting for the day, lovely
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@Ladypeace (2028)
• Singapore
14 Feb 16
A touching love story which leads the reader to visualize the characters in their setting. I painted my own picture of this in my mind. Have you?