My ShortStory from these Two words bag and chest.

@Hatley (164629)
Garden Grove, California
February 19, 2016 2:24pm CST
Jenny wondered if she would ever have the nerve to leave Belden. She was so tired of being hit whenever he got into one of his mean moods. This last time he had hit her in her chest leaving some very bad bruises. She had taken some classes in self defense. She opened the bag of Chocolate mints she had bought on sale. Just then Belden entered the room, his face reddened as he saw her and her bag of chocolate Mints..Belden roared" you fat cow have not told you not to eat that stuff?: Now, she thought as she ducked his blows and hit him in the groin wth her knee hard.Belden went down.,He screamed like a child as she called the police and reported wife abuse. The police woman took pictures of her bruises and they took her and her small baby to a shelter for battered wo men credits go to .@goneoveralpha for the prompt words bag and chest
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@just4him (120559)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
19 Feb 16
This story captures what so many women go through. Well written.
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@Hatley (164629)
• Garden Grove, California
19 Feb 16
thanks I have known some abused women we helped to get to shelters as the peopple next doorto themwould not get involved.
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@just4him (120559)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
20 Feb 16
@Hatley I'm glad you got involved.
@Jessicalynnt (47895)
• Centralia, Missouri
20 Feb 16
interesting use of those words
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@Hatley (164629)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Feb 16
thanks I had fun devising a short stiry with these two word ropts it was reallyy fascinating to me.
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@Tampa_girl7 (25868)
• United States
19 Feb 16
I hope that she got justice.
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@Hatley (164629)
• Garden Grove, California
19 Feb 16
Yes she dd indeed He went to prison as she finallyfiles agains him.
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@celticeagle (118651)
• Boise, Idaho
20 Feb 16
Who's giving you prompt words Girl? LOL
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@jstory07 (68336)
• Roseburg, Oregon
20 Feb 16
You did a good job with those two words.