Violent Poetry

April 26, 2016 11:16am CST
My gun is so big, its a popstar. Im selling potions to rockstars I talk to bosses, lives are lost, throw it in the river make sure the knives are lost. An assassine, im assessing assets, I set traps and excape with the rest of your cash.
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@just4him (81227)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Apr 16
That is violent.
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27 Apr 16
Yes it is
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27 Apr 16
Should I write more?
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@just4him (81227)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
27 Apr 16
@MediciMoor You can write more, but try not to make it so violent.
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@EddieHands (30972)
• United States
26 Apr 16
Beautiful violent poetry !
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27 Apr 16
Thanks
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@EddieHands (30972)
• United States
27 Apr 16
@MediciMoor you're welcome.. please write more!
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27 Apr 16
@EddieHandsDo you want more violent poetry?
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@zarlamain (23642)
• United States
6 Jun 16
That was interesting.
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6 Jun 16
Ok
@zarlamain (23642)
• United States
6 Jun 16
@MediciMoor Have you ever considered sending your poetry to poetry sites?
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@Daljinder (19275)
• India
26 Apr 16
Eh? Explosive alright
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26 Apr 16
Thanks
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