There once was an old man from Milwaukee

@Hatley (164654)
Garden Grove, California
May 20, 2016 1:53pm CST
There was an old man from Milwaukee Who believed that he was a she Got flustered when he sat down to pee No matter how he w ggled and squirmed He could never come to terms No matter what hapened he was a he I looked up limericks its aaabba so that is what I did No harm in trying so they say So will co me back again another day original limerick and post and graphic by p Hatley both copyrighted 2016
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@jaboUK (53920)
• United Kingdom
20 May 16
Oh Patsie , you'll get it right sometime. It's aabba - only 5 lines. Nice poem though.
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
20 May 16
drat I still messed up five lines thats easier anyway
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• United Kingdom
20 May 16
Isn't that the name of the Swedish pop super group?
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@jaboUK (53920)
• United Kingdom
20 May 16
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@pgntwo (21648)
• Derry, Northern Ireland
20 May 16
Good one! You wait till @jabouk gets her teeth into that super limerickish rhyme... Or @Asylum, for that matter.
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
20 May 16
IwIknow they are better but Im goanna get there an d people will talk abut me and mylimerck not anyone e;lse he he
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@just4him (116782)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
20 May 16
I haven't seen the six line limerick before. Well done.
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
20 May 16
sorry I goofed I think. will check.
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@just4him (116782)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
20 May 16
@Hatley The normal is a five line limerick. You did good with a six line.
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@TRBRocks420 (77404)
• Banks, Oregon
20 May 16
lol nice limerick.
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
20 May 16
thanks still n there trying
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@Orson_Kart (4353)
• United Kingdom
20 May 16
In order to be a transgender, Some bits from a guy you gotta lend her, Whether it's she to a he, Or he to a she, Is it really what god did intend, er?
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@jaboUK (53920)
• United Kingdom
20 May 16
@Orson_Kart grooaan at that last 'rhyme'!! Apart from that - great
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• United Kingdom
20 May 16
@jaboUK Sorry, like transgenders, my poems need a bit of work done on them.
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@acelawrites (10931)
• Philippines
20 May 16
Funny limerick, and yes, the man is quite funny too!
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
20 May 16
tanks will get it right yet
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@celticeagle (118231)
• Boise, Idaho
20 May 16
As usual it is entertaining and fun.
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@Jessicalynnt (47854)
• Centralia, Missouri
21 May 16
this one made me giggle!