How is my grammer ? Did I get it right ?
By F Iqbal
May 25, 2016 9:28am CST
When I was 5 years old. I loved natual scenery. My father and I would go to the beach every sunday morning. I wore the sandles which had Tom and Jerry pictures on it. We used to ride bicycle. My father drove the bike , and I used to sat on the carrier. We used to travel for 5 km far . After we arrived , we used to see the sun rise . The sun came out, it looked like from the bench of the earth . The waves rolled on the sand , and the warbles of the birds sounded melodic . I was looking for seashell on the sand of the beach. I brought the plastic bag and I caught the little crabs then I put the little crabs in the plastic bag . We used to jog on the seashore and Inhaled the fresh morning air . We made the castle from the sand . And swam in the shallow water , and we used to catch the fish used fish net in the river near the sea , We got many fish . We went to home , and my mother cooked it , and made it the fried fish , and we ate the fried fish together .
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