The 'weaping 'willow

@Hatley (164755)
Garden Grove, California
June 1, 2016 2:11pm CST
The willow looked down at the water "Who am I lovely stream " "You are "w illow tit willow, tit willow Why do I weep she asked. Mother Nature heard her wail "You are Willow wood nymph wicked witch has put a spell on you Let me see I might undo" ,Mother Nature waved her arms She could undo charms "The green leaves dropped 'there stood a beautiful Nymph "The stream called "Hurray" The little birds all chirped Lovely nymph called "I'm free" All the woods people clapped. One original poem by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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@zarlamain (24531)
• United States
1 Jun 16
Very beautiful!
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@Hatley (164755)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jun 16
thanks zarla Im so glad you liked it as I had fu n writung iut
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@zarlamain (24531)
• United States
2 Jun 16
@Hatley Very nice!
@KristenH (23301)
• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
1 Jun 16
Beautiful. It reminds me of a weeping willow tree back in NJ and near the beach. Perfect shade.
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@Hatley (164755)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jun 16
n the "Black hills of South Dakota there are manywillows in the streams there.i
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@KristenH (23301)
• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
1 Jun 16
@Hatley Oooo.
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@Hatley (164755)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jun 16
@KristenH The Black Hills of Southj D akota are real;luy worth visitihg
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@celticeagle (117156)
• Boise, Idaho
1 Jun 16
How cute is that? I enjoyed that one. I like willows.
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@Hatley (164755)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jun 16
thanks Im glad that you liked it as I enjoyed writing it too
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@celticeagle (117156)
• Boise, Idaho
2 Jun 16
@Hatley ...Always enjoy those.
• United States
1 Jun 16
Lovely poem Patsie. Wish I could write as well.
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@Hatley (164755)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jun 16
thanks Im so glad you liked it as I had fun writilng itr
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@Corbin5 (99843)
• United States
1 Jun 16
You have painted a pretty picture for us with your words! Thank you!
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@Hatley (164755)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jun 16
thanks I really had fun writing it.
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@Jessicalynnt (47790)
• Centralia, Missouri
2 Jun 16
what a lovely little poem!