Dream a Little ' Dream 'With Me

@Hatley (164654)
Garden Grove, California
June 20, 2016 2:37pm CST
Dream a little dream with me Blue skies cool moist air ah sea Walkiing on the sand so grand "Cool salty air nothing bland. Lets climb that hill full of P:ines Take my hand while we climb The view is really sublime Watch that eagle swoop We are now in the woods Pine, cedar,spruce scented air Relax we have not one care No coulds now no shoulds One original poem by P Hatley copyrighted 2016 ' ' :
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@paigea (22197)
• Canada
20 Jun 16
That is a lovely poem.
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Jun 16
thanks Im glad you lilkedit as I had fun writing it too
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@celticeagle (118231)
• Boise, Idaho
20 Jun 16
Where'd all of the 't's' come from?
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Jun 16
what ts I deleted all of them computer was giving me bad time gone nos
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@celticeagle (118231)
• Boise, Idaho
21 Jun 16
@Hatley ......Just teasing mostly on my end.
@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Jun 16
@celticeagle ,my keyboard got the notioon it did n0ot want me to write capital letters where i wated them but kept moviongthem]maddening
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@zarlamain (24525)
• United States
20 Jun 16
That's a very lovely poem!
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Jun 16
thanks i really enjoyed writing that t oo
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@zarlamain (24525)
• United States
21 Jun 16
@Hatley That's great.
@RubyHawk (25105)
• Atlanta, Georgia
21 Jun 16
That sounds grand Hatley, I love walking in the woods under blue skies.
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Jun 16
I do t oo and I tried to think of c ool scenes to co ol off whith l ol
@marlina (73885)
• Canada
20 Jun 16
Lovely poem about a little dream, what is for your husband?
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@Hatley (164654)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Jun 16
no just to take ones mind off the very hot weather heart lol
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@Jessicalynnt (47854)
• Centralia, Missouri
21 Jun 16
I loved the very first 2 lines, quite a rhythm you have going there