Dream a Little ' Dream 'With Me

By Patsie Hatley

@Hatley (163781)

Garden Grove, California

June 20, 2016 2:37pm CST

Dream a little dream with me Blue skies cool moist air ah sea Walkiing on the sand so grand "Cool salty air nothing bland. Lets climb that hill full of P:ines Take my hand while we climb The view is really sublime Watch that eagle swoop We are now in the woods Pine, cedar,spruce scented air Relax we have not one care No coulds now no shoulds One original poem by P Hatley copyrighted 2016 ' ' :

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@paigea (35689)

• Canada

20 Jun 16

That is a lovely poem.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

21 Jun 16

thanks Im glad you lilkedit as I had fun writing it too

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@celticeagle (159008)

• Boise, Idaho

20 Jun 16

Where'd all of the 't's' come from?

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

21 Jun 16

what ts I deleted all of them computer was giving me bad time gone nos

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

21 Jun 16

@celticeagle ,my keyboard got the notioon it did n0ot want me to write capital letters where i wated them but kept moviongthem]maddening

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@celticeagle (159008)

• Boise, Idaho

21 Jun 16

@Hatley ......Just teasing mostly on my end.

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@marlina (154166)

• Canada

20 Jun 16

Lovely poem about a little dream, what is for your husband?

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

21 Jun 16

no just to take ones mind off the very hot weather heart lol

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@Jessicalynnt (50525)

• Centralia, Missouri

21 Jun 16

I loved the very first 2 lines, quite a rhythm you have going there

@RubyHawk (99425)

• Atlanta, Georgia

21 Jun 16

That sounds grand Hatley, I love walking in the woods under blue skies.

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@Hatley (163781)

• Garden Grove, California

21 Jun 16

I do t oo and I tried to think of c ool scenes to co ol off whith l ol