'There 'Was An Old Man from Newport 'Beach

@Hatley (157787)
Garden Grove, California
June 29, 2016 3:37pm CST
There was an old man from Newport 'Beach Who thought he was a leech' He bit into a mans thigh so deep That the poor man yelled beep beep beep. 'Thjen the man mashed him down like a ripe peach. Thats the best I can do right now 'Don';t be holier than thou Please do;t have a cow. "Causew allk I ca say is wowl Onr original poem and limerick by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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@amadeo (46205)
• United States
29 Jun 16
thanks.Cute mashed him down like a ripe peach.Ugh
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@Hatley (157787)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Jun 16
yeo I did get a bit gory
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@Juliaacv (22132)
• Canada
29 Jun 16
That IS so great, I am enjoying a good laugh because you tickled my funny bone here-thanks!
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@Hatley (157787)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Jun 16
I am glad as thats what I wanted lol lol
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@garymarsh6 (12100)
• United Kingdom
29 Jun 16
Well done Mrs Shakespear!
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@Hatley (157787)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Jun 16
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• Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic
29 Jun 16
lmao a little bit gruesome but I enjoyed it still
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@Hatley (157787)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Jun 16
yes U gad ti stretcg things to get the rhyme lol
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@TRBRocks420 (60873)
• Banks, Oregon
29 Jun 16
And, at the very end he was fed to a leech, hoping it would teach lol.
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@Hatley (157787)
• Garden Grove, California
29 Jun 16
good one thanks lo l
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@dwstory (969)
• Roseburg, Oregon
30 Jun 16
You did good with your poem.