There Was 'Old Man From, Brazil

@Hatley (164736)
Garden Grove, California
July 1, 2016 10:08am CST
There Was An Old Man From Brazil Who got drunk going up a hill Rolled down in a big ball Everyone heard hin fall He yelled" hell ofa hill Bill So to make this a discussion am I getting any better Mylotters? I am certainly trying and trying and hoping I have improved.' One original limerick by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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@LeaPea2417 (19196)
• Toccoa, Georgia
1 Jul 16
I like the poem. I wish I could rhyme more when attempting to write a poem.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
thertes sites on the net to help us to rhyme
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@LeaPea2417 (19196)
• Toccoa, Georgia
1 Jul 16
@Hatley I will search that and check it out, thanks.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
@LeaPea2417 have fun once you get the rhyming bug it really gets to you lol
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• India
1 Jul 16
Nice one buddy, Keep posting.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
thanks I guess you would call me a b uddess as im a woman thanks
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• India
1 Jul 16
@Hatley ya sure.
@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
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• Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic
1 Jul 16
I enjoy your random poems lol Keep at it!
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
thanks whenever I see your user name I get hungry for baco n lol
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• Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic
1 Jul 16
@Hatley Lol bacon tends to that to people jejeje
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• Santo Domingo, Dominican Republic
3 Jul 16
@Hatley lol I always say il.fry 2 or 3 and ends up making the whole pack lol
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@Jessicalynnt (47790)
• Centralia, Missouri
2 Jul 16
good roll at the end to encourage comments, and I think you are deff improving on the limericks
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
2 Jul 16
Im so glad as Im really trying and have studied how to make limericks too
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• Centralia, Missouri
2 Jul 16
@Hatley they are a unique thing. I can hit the number of syllabuls (spelling no idea there), but have trouble with the overall theme
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
3 Jul 16
@Jessicalynnt yes I have to ponderthat and try several dfferent ideas
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@marlina (71334)
• Canada
1 Jul 16
Yes, you are getting funnier.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
Im glad to hear it; lol
@jstory07 (65401)
• Roseburg, Oregon
1 Jul 16
You are good at what you write.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
thanks I really enjoy writing so much
@TRBRocks420 (74032)
• Banks, Oregon
1 Jul 16
Well done on the poem.
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@Hatley (164736)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
thanks I do have fun writing lol