There Was 'Old Man From, Brazil
@Hatley (163781)
Garden Grove, California
July 1, 2016 10:08am CST
There Was An Old Man From Brazil
Who got drunk going up a hill
Rolled down in a big ball
Everyone heard hin fall
He yelled" hell ofa hill Bill
So to make this a discussion am I getting any better
Mylotters? I am certainly trying and trying and hoping
I have improved.'
One original limerick by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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@LeaPea2417 (36428)
• Toccoa, Georgia
1 Jul 16
I like the poem. I wish I could rhyme more when attempting to write a poem.
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@LeaPea2417 (36428)
• Toccoa, Georgia
1 Jul 16
@Hatley I will search that and check it out, thanks.
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
1 Jul 16
@LeaPea2417 have fun once you get the rhyming bug it really gets to you lol
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
2 Jul 16
good roll at the end to encourage comments, and I think you are deff improving on the limericks
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@Hatley (163781)
• Garden Grove, California
3 Jul 16
@Jessicalynnt yes I have to ponderthat and try several dfferent ideas
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
2 Jul 16
@Hatley they are a unique thing. I can hit the number of syllabuls (spelling no idea there), but have trouble with the overall theme
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@BACONSTRIPSXXX (14351)
• West Haven, Connecticut
1 Jul 16
I enjoy your random poems lol Keep at it!
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@BACONSTRIPSXXX (14351)
• West Haven, Connecticut
1 Jul 16
@Hatley Lol bacon tends to that to people jejeje
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@BACONSTRIPSXXX (14351)
• West Haven, Connecticut
3 Jul 16
@Hatley lol I always say il.fry 2 or 3 and ends up making the whole pack lol
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