A Bit After Ten

@Hatley (164484)
Garden Grove, California
July 10, 2016 12:27pm CST
Sun shining brightly no breeze Out my window I see the trees The care givers cleaned my room So fast she was here then zoom The air feels breathless and humid Going to be hot so its said I had my nap now mylotting some 'Need to read others everyone.' Some where a bird is singing ' Wonder the joy hes bringing A day in Ju ly is winging I want to grab time slow it down, Oneoriginal poem by P Hatley copyrighted 2016
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• Preston, England
10 Jul 16
great capture, descriptive and capturing a mood too
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@Hatley (164484)
• Garden Grove, California
10 Jul 16
thanisa that was what I aimed foe
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• India
10 Jul 16
the day seems to be starting nicely. have a nice day. The poem is great.
@Hatley (164484)
• Garden Grove, California
10 Jul 16
thanksIm always glad when people likemy pooems as I enjoyed writing
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• India
11 Jul 16
@Hatley that's cool, Keep on writing we need more.
@Hatley (164484)
• Garden Grove, California
11 Jul 16
@sunilparthan thatI will do o f course lol
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@Jessicalynnt (47880)
• Centralia, Missouri
11 Jul 16
perhaps a fan might be a good addition?