She loves me.

@xFiacre (7414)
Ireland
August 7, 2016 10:39am CST
I would run away and hide myself in the dusty streets of Rome; I would sleep a million miles from you beneath the starry dome; then when drunk with self-indulgence, bald, but clinging to a comb, you would bathe my lacerations and welcome me back home.
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@pgntwo (20830)
• Derry, Northern Ireland
7 Aug 16
@rebelann: Oh, now we all know, That it's a pome Writ from the heart Away from home! Without classification Not lacking in loam; This li'l ditty's not In any book or tome!
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@xFiacre (7414)
• Ireland
7 Aug 16
@pgntwo Okay. Yours is better.
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@pgntwo (20830)
• Derry, Northern Ireland
7 Aug 16
@xFiacre Ah, it's not a competition - besides, what else to do on a blowy, wet Sunday afternoon?
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@rebelann (34147)
• El Paso, Texas
7 Aug 16
That was kool. I'll have to remember to add you to my list. It's so fascinating to read what word talented people like you write.
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@rebelann (34147)
• El Paso, Texas
7 Aug 16
Pretty kool ..... k, it isn't a limerick so what is it?
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@xFiacre (7414)
• Ireland
7 Aug 16
@rebelann It's the product of a sheepish mind but I don't think the literary critics have devised a category for it yet.
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@rebelann (34147)
• El Paso, Texas
7 Aug 16
Oh I'll bet someone has @xFiacre lets ask @jabouk or @asylum surly they'll have a clue.
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@pgntwo (20830)
• Derry, Northern Ireland
7 Aug 16
@rebelann Unique, perhaps?
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@jaboUK (51417)
• United Kingdom
7 Aug 16
A very good poem - personal experience?
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